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Black Queen 3 37.50%
Buck.Shot 5 62.50%
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Old 03-25-05, 01:15 PM   #61
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wghat the hell?
youd sit on my face if u could?LOL...WHAAAT?
hahah, could people vote?
thanks for the feed tho..
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Old 03-29-05, 08:52 PM   #62
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aiight...lol, good battle...
black Q~your opener was good, pretty effective, was hard hitting, liked the "hide in a hole,gopher it"bar,was witty,closer was a decent punch, but you had no real personals, but your vocabulary was good here, you did aight..1
escolayde~hard hitting opener, effective personal there, nice vocabulary, creative punches here,i'm feelin it,your flow and the way you set your punches up is good(structure)LOL@ the seven eleven bar, good, again effective hard diss there, and again with the window sheen line, ohhh dayum,you closed this off nicely, great job on the strong punches, again,this was a good battle to read, and i've read 12 today, this was one of the better ones,good job both,but escolayde, i thought you took this with ease,for creativity in your punches...1
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Old 03-30-05, 10:14 PM   #63
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BQ:

Comparing ur text to mine is like comparing playboy to the bible
Cause Buck just a cheap substitution for something desirable
^^good meta decent punch 7/10
No satis..faction, deep breathe and pause to effect,
He lost so many battles he still dont think dat he whack
^^no 2/10
But if you wanna go for rapping, i'll take you out in sections,
Voting is extremly one sided, like a cuban prez election
^^decent 4/10
But if you wanna try and win, by all means go for it,
Or you can be a bitch and hide in a hole, gopher it
^^dope bar best of the battle 9/10
Hold the glamour now, pretend like you a movie big fuckin star,
Cuz after these hits, your head will be seeing moving stars
^^no 3/10
ya lines ridiculous, like mute cows, i herd you were dumb
i could "ridicule less" but that wouldn't be as much fun
^^decent 5/10

Overall: 30/60 (50%)

Buck.Shot:

Says I'm whack, but she followed me into The Crew (Jury)
Nobody likes ya rhymes, they just wanna Screw!
^^no 2/10
I'ma hit the nail on the Head, n make ya Wig Flip
This tranny got a Bigger dick than Skriptz!
^^no 2/10
Chubby Cheeks, lookin like a Young Oprah
Bitch so fat.......
....They got literally ''put it in ya Belly'' when they Poke-ya!
^^ok 4/10
Claimed i never beat a Vet when her Record aint hit Eleven
Bout ta open a chain of Stores in ya Honour...
.......''Legs Open TwentyFour-SEVEN!''
^^ok 4/10
She went from Lil Nae, then claimed ta be a 'Queen'
Her rhymes wouldnt ''Shine'' if ya coated 'em in Window Sheen!
^^no 3/10
Just so you know, I enjoy the Hate, an It gives me Wood
So go 'head n admit it, You'd sit on my Face if you Could!
^^no 3/10
I'ma take you on a stroll thru the Hood...
....Let my Boys run a Train
Only reazon she think she ''Wise'' dissin me is.....
......She Constantly Givin' BRAIN!
^^decent 5/10

Overall: 23/70 (39%)

Vote: Black Queen

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Old 04-07-05, 06:51 PM   #64
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uppin............................................. ....
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Old 04-13-05, 10:58 AM   #65
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Old 04-13-05, 07:09 PM   #66
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Voted For: Black Queen

Aight..

Black Queen: 6/10

You Had Some Aight Metaphors and Punches...Some Lines Fell off and Were Fillers and Wack. Your Vocab Wasn't Too Bad and Structure Was Decent.

Buch Shot.: 4/10

You Had One Decent Punch, but The Rest of Your Verse Was Shitty In My Eyes. Just Old and Not Enjoyable. No Vocab and Every Bar Delt With Sexual Content. Be Original and Bust Some Sick Metas Man. Structure Was Aight.

Overall Vote: Black Queen For More Punches and Better Verse.

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Old 04-16-05, 09:11 PM   #67
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thx fo da vote pimp uppin...........................
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Old 04-17-05, 04:07 PM   #68
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uppin uppin uppin again im sick of dis............
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Old 04-21-05, 05:27 PM   #69
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Old 04-21-05, 07:34 PM   #70
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Old 04-21-05, 09:05 PM   #71
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esco came hard here. black queen ur flow wasnt good there it bounced around and the punches were pretty weak especially the gopher in the hole one. esco that shit was hard man, especially the legs open 24/7 that was some hardcore writing i laughed on that one. the flow was sick it went together perfect, it was pretty much a one sided battle which is why i vote for esco his personals were real good
 
Old 04-23-05, 09:03 AM   #72
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Old 04-23-05, 02:48 PM   #73
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black queen

opener was straight poison... and then.... it all went to hell... what happened between ya opener and ya closer? i mean... other than the cuban prez election joint.. i ain't really see anything that made you win this... the go for it/gopher it line? i see the idea but it didn't work out too well for ya.... and star and star don't RHYME... it's the SAME word.... lost points for that also

Teph... ya structure was ya biggest issue... lines just seemd mad short at times... and then stretched at others...nice personal in the opener... closer was killer... that pretty much summed it up... better word play and disses connected better...had a lil bit of filler and fluff in ya verse but it didn't hurt ya too much.... still, i've seen better verses....but ya won
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