Voted For: Mimesis

soon as u wit men u the 1st to hold da vent up n rip to dispence da zips
cuz i already knew u wuz a bitch....but you went n cemented it^^
the concept is played and delivery is weak.
n it's passed the percentages...no one like u..how's u bearin to lose?
and plus that eyein-steins fits when your only hearing the booze (einstein)
pretty basic bit of wordplay, but ok.
put ur rhymin in the rack..& stick a diamond in ya back..ya feel it?
cos i'll cut ur leg-end-eerie to give u a bird-in so u'll be pheonix (legendary/burden)
the wordplay was cool, little forced.
cos i'ma seal this by moppin up the mess n waste when i stomp ur breast n face
but i love yo moms..so there's no reason for me to put u on death-10/8 (detonate)
this just seems weak, the 2nd line was shit.
cuz ur loss is set n ur gay..so i'll put ur mouth on this shotty while droolin
n u wanted me to play mime-sis just to touch quiet wit body movements
lol, decent play on his name.
it's opposite of soothing..u gettin slaughtered n on the corner you paying to flex
& you couldn't mal-come-for-tables even tho i just ate(8) u to(2) X (malcolm X)
wording cud be better, nice attempt at playin off the siggy shit though.
never experienced sex unless you were the one that wuz payin,duh
cos lookin at wat's up be ur hobby with men while saying 'uuuhhhh' (uhhwatupb)
homo line = PLAYED!!
i'ma be sendin the wheel when u feel....the violence dat'll make u bend
and you got no chance/chants of winnin this cuz u losin in silence on-the-ends(audience)
meh, this was ok, but the wordplay seems forced again.
ur in a cast,taddle no more cos in our last battle u got whored n fazed-n
to win?u wanted to jack-it..so there's no surprise u'd resort to swaying (jacket)
wack, cuz u never whored him, u got him DQ'ed for some gay ass swaying, and it wasnt even swaying.
kill u dead from rage..n put ur head on page once I beat u to da books..u all blue
& even ur own boys wearin you out..so no wonder ur dawgs look to mall/maul you
ok wordplay.

ok, ure verse was inconsistent, u had a few played punches in there, the wordplay at times was really forced to fuck, you need to stop using italics and shit cuz that makes ure verse look herbish. some of the punches were nice, others lacked really, the wording cud be better and the delivery of some needs work, overall this wasn't one of your better verses.


You think you got skills? Seriously, motherfucker, you're just lame dude
Was a Natural Killa... but then everybody hated you on that name too
basic, but the comedy of the line is cool.
So you made another alias.. you suck, im ill.. there's nothing switched
Yet you have no respect for women?
..kid, you ARE a fucking bitch
this was more simplistic than the previous bar.
It's as simple as that.. you act like you're dope.. but man, i've had it
You only burn cats.. because you reported 9th Degree for harassment
lol, decent personal here.
That shit is fucking pathetic.. you lose to cats when I've whored 'em
You been bordering wack so much.. mexicans have taken over the forum
OMFG!! LMFAO!!! this was dope!!
So come with your quotes and bullshit.. your still screwed in this fight
The good heads come togther..
..you get rejected from every crew on the site
decent personal again.
You do got some dope punches though.. like you was holding fighters
Cause you are still the most respected.. in the fucking multi cypher
not feelin this that much, the punch is barely hitting
You fucking suck.. but you still don't think all of my wins are clear?
Your concepts won't rear over mine.. but they sure as hell are rear
lol, pretty decent..
This ain't a fucking joke.. for real, everything I've wrote has owned
I ain't fucking a round bitch..
..but you do every time your girl goes to your home
DAMN!! the funniest bar so far.
Ain't respected here.. haven't done shit, now you're gonna lose this
But you are the first idiot to provide all of the proof.. to where YOU bit
OUCH!! owned!!
You ain't worth any more time.. all your lines are just keeping harmless
Man, I'm only gassed up because I'm just not used to eating garbage
concept is played..

mim you had a few lack-luster bars, ones that to me seemed like you put no thought into them, one played line at the end which was weak. the opening two bars were not that hard, but in between you had some dope punches. the mexican one and the one about his girl had me rollin' overall a good verse, not ure best but more than enough to get the win.

V/ - Mimesis

RTF!! on my battle, link is in the siggy

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yay!!!......finnaly a legit vote......

I'll tell strobe to close this battle now...

But make sure and RTF mimesis

I'll hit his battle up now.

Word to getting strobe to close the battle.

I thought you were telling strobe to close this battle?

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=124674

^I did....but strobe said I had to request it as deranged....so it'll be closed tomorrow.