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outcome go poll vote on my battle and leave a lmsg 2 say u have then i will cum bk here and drop my poll vote the link 2 me battle is on the 1st page

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You newbie fucks. Outcome....your verse was garbage...nothing more, possibly less. Virtually everything about it was shit. What little punches you did have were weak as fuck. Jihad...used wordplay...had some nice concepts...much harder punches then outcome. There were a couple lines that were too extended...and a couple played. It wasn't a bad verse...with some polish and some work, you could be dope. Just keep the creativity up. Try and get in elevated front lines...get away from these newbie sluts.

Vote ~ Jihad

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Out:
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden
im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin
laden's old...coulda picked a betta word than bobin, maybe hangin? my opinion
pulled up by the back, show you to the world
Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl?
punch i guess, kinda weak
West london huh? never been there, dont care to
To bad theres no talent look they sent you
first line's fillin, nex is aight
In my first two lines i left you crippled
Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls
aight, you didnt really leave him crippled
Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit"
Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight
i don't know where the rhyme is here
Ill give you portriats to make this timeless
Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless
aight punch
The definition is, no one to bite, define this?
If im right your battle will be lineless
aight
I decide to research, and came across your openmic
What the hell was that shit, you were high right?
didn't go into his openmic, but the puch was aight
Im not expecting much really im not..
In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop
K, you already kinda said this

J:
Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system..
Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace..
Started aight, then didn't rhyme...
'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality..
Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities..
aight
Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?..
You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam..
ok ok
Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars..
putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars..
alright rhyme, didn't really hit tho
Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin..
Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff)
You shoulda said "..fists spark it", that woulda flowed betta, nice punch tho
Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second..
God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence..
I dunno
Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock..
Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''..
aight punch, good play
Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries..
Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die..
Aight ending

punches, goes to J, he had more, both kinda weak tho.
flow, goes to J, Out, you had a couple non rhymers, really broke the flow.

Aight, Ima say this is J's. When I have 100 posts, I'll vote, aight? Check out my battles.

And Outcome, about that line you didnt understand:

"I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;"

I can't believe you didnt get it. Its a pun. Whining, like boo hoo, and wining like making wine? You crush grapes to make wine? get he? Joke joke ha ha???

aight, here's my battles, dont be pricks, hit em up, I took some time here:

KayOhh vs Chugs4Life

KayOhh vs Kuniva

Thx for the experienced peepz...

these newbies suck..

uppin

well, to correct oliver, this is not one of the best battles this week, but it was decent for frontlines..both had decent structure,and everything else was about even, flow was on point for both, but I have to give this one to Jihod because in my opinion, he had harder hitting punches that really connected harder and was better.
so my vote goes to Jihod

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962

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R.I.P. Bodie

cool...

poll votes aswell plz...


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damn, I just have to post again, Jihod had some good ass wordplay, not that I read some shit over again..he should be winnin this shit 5-0..anyway..that lesiban line was hard,..that god line was tight also..this was just an continue of my last vote, so it wont get disqaulified..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962

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R.I.P. Bodie

omg this is bullshit.....Jihad Ripped him....

Multis....Jihad....Off the hook and they made sense...
Punches...Jihad...Outcome wordf your shit better...jihad nice
Flow...Jihad for DAYYYYYYSSSS....outcome just didnt flow
Opener....jihad....outcomes was just filler
Closer....jihad.....agian dudes was just a filler(it didnt even flow)

VOTE JIHAD....

Outcomes got some major d/r
if this was on original it would be closed due to d/r

Vote=OUTCOME

Reasons:

Jilad, you had weak personals, not one punch you threw landed, its all basic you need to elevate or take shots better. Pluse YOU LOL'D in your rhyme, what are you a 10 year old gurl. who giggles in a battle???plus your structure sucks. keep it simple your shits choppy as hell

OUTCOME, never seen a single post from you but you killed him with the one line...West london huh? never been there, dont care to
To bad theres no talent look they sent you......then smacked him with .....Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit"
Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight.... good word play better flow structure, word play, and all around skill...

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you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot//
if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot//
what is you confused cant member which team you be with//
i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen//

that was amazin dogs, im biggin u up! u the men!
check this out
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115505