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King of Thievez 2 40.00%
-Technician- 3 60.00%
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Old 02-10-04, 12:55 AM   #1
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King of Thievez [vs.] Technician

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no c,h,dr votes
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blind spit
30 minutes till drop from check in

good luck .....
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Old 02-10-04, 12:57 AM   #2
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check in............................................
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Old 02-10-04, 01:01 AM   #3
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microphone checka 1-2-1-2...don't start no shit...won't be no shit...if you don't give a damn we don't give a fuck...WHAT!!!!!!
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Old 02-10-04, 01:24 AM   #4
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Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest...
No where near the top though I use your name as target practice
& with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist
Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it!
When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas.....
KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses!
See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes...
I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes
You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers...
Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders!
Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts......
I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood!
On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug...
Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what!
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Old 02-10-04, 01:36 AM   #5
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fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style...
you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title...
battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire...
ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire...
tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest...
that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness...
fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play...
you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay...
what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me??????
I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's...
I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you...
go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you...
I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst...
when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse...
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Old 02-10-04, 02:07 AM   #6
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umm...this was an aight battle.....
In my opinion tha punches were on one side
Tech...ya target practice punch was good
But other than that...you just focused on multies
You had another punch in ya verse(support fenders one)
But thats it...it flow'd nice...and tha wordplay(KOT) was there

King..you had a couple fillers here and there
but besides that solid verse...
Flow'd good..had some good personals(put on)
& you had lots of punches with wordplay
(retire, ness, 60's, rob u, and ya closer)
Don't know what was up with tha whole chuck thing but

King gets my vote for more consistant punches

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oh...the Chuck thing...his name'z Chuck...mine name'z Tomas...now that we've all been introduced let's get drunk and party all night...
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Old 02-10-04, 02:26 AM   #8
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^lol truuuu....uppn this.....good battle.....welcome back..............
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Old 02-10-04, 02:33 AM   #9
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everybody that visits this battle...take 2 puffs and pass...me and Tech will each get dome blunts...cause we special...I've alwayz wanted to roll either 2 Garcia y Vega Crystalz or 2 vanilla Dutchez together into one long blunt and smoke it to the dome...but my girl'z tryin' to motivate me to be sober...I'm doin' good so far...I think it's been 2-3 dayz now since I smoked last...I guess this meanz I gotta drink more now...
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Old 02-10-04, 02:53 AM   #10
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^ yea same with my chic....she like u cant smoke every day blah blah blah same old hoop lah....i've been chillin out to like once or twice a day....but fuck that...i saty high and love it....lol uppn...............good luck with sobriety holmes....
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I'm tryin' to beat my month and a half record for not burnin'...
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Old 02-10-04, 06:29 PM   #12
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yall are fuckin funny. i think that tech got this battle. i think he had herder punches than kot but kot had a few more personals tehn tech. both had a pretty good structure kots was a little shorter than usuall and techs was a little long but both made it work so thats a tie.tech nad more multis and they were mostly good.techs battle scars line was the best in both verses but i liked kots closer too. cause of the punches i give it to tech but it was a close battle though.

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Old 02-10-04, 08:57 PM   #13
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Here out of all the rappers, let me say....you far from wackest...
No where near the top though I use your name as target practice
hmm..ok...4/10

& with how hard you actin, you'll be the first to start the blacklist
Your verse so tactless, herbs shouldnt talk shit if they cant back it!
nah....2/10

When I unvail for you my new found skill it's like you lookin at an atlas.....
KOT bookin flights for passage but it's blind ambition like loosin ya glasses!
good try...4/10

See theres skilled and novice and I think your confusin' the classes...
I'll abuse you with rachets, Tech give you battle scars bruises & bashes
not really a punch..3/10

You can't withstand consistant punishment like kids with short tempers...
Your the car that was totaled cause you were missin ur support fenders!
coulded worded to dopeness but no...3/10

Not protected enough when subjected to such neglection of guts......
I'm progressin so much that aggression is rush I'm fetchin' your blood!
multies dont win battles...3/10

On Rb ur reflection is mud, nothin but dirt it was swept under the rug...
Son needs a hug, tough luck! my punches like somethin hit u & ur still wonderin what!
multies too much again....4/10

overall for Tech...23/70...



fucka Technician I molest writtenz...fuck ya style...
you ain't shit but a put on...it even sayz in ya custom title...
reckon u get a 3/10

battle me...you a dead man...I'll watch ya breathin' expire...
ya like a car rollin' on a spare...you need to retire...
not at all...2/10

tell me how this Technician is gonna fix a full clip in the chest...
that will throw ya whole state back in time like Mitchell & Ness...
no comment...3/10

fuck Chuck...to me ya nursery rhymez ain't nuttin' but Child's Play...
you ain't a rapper you're and "artist" in other wordz ya stylez gay...
hell no!!....2/10

what's this bullshit you been spewin' tryin' to be usin' against me??????
I'ma step on Chucks more than basketball playerz used to do in the 60's...
pretty coo....6/10

I'ma call you cherry cause my big gun has been fiendin' to pop you...
go door to door sellin' blowjobz then maybe I'ma have a reason to rob you...
nah...didnt like...3/10

I'ma kill you, go to ya funeral and start strippin' ya hearst...
when I tell my bitch to speak only then will you be spittin' ya verse...
not good...3/10


overall for KOT...22/70



oohh...tech wins by one...pretty weak battle...not too much was real
creative on both sides...but tech barely edged it out
even though he overdid the multies...peace
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Old 02-11-04, 12:06 AM   #15
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^^^obviously has no clue what he'z talkin' about...but uppin' anywayz...
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