Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

If Mimesis wins not only will he get the win, but the battle where Deranged had him DQed will stay closed, but the loss will be taken off of Mimesis' record, and the win off of Deranged.

If Deranged wins he will keep the win from both battles.

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 09-15-05 at 01:30 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

Deranged has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-05 07:30 PM.

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...32&postcount=86

soon as u wit men u the 1st to hold da vent up n rip to dispence da zips
cuz i already knew u wuz a bitch....but you went n cemented it^^
n it's passed the percentages...no one like u..how's u bearin to lose?
and plus that eyein-steins fits when your only hearing the booze (einstein)
put ur rhymin in the rack..& stick a diamond in ya back..ya feel it?
cos i'll cut ur leg-end-eerie to give u a bird-in so u'll be pheonix (legendary/burden)
cos i'ma seal this by moppin up the mess n waste when i stomp ur breast n face
but i love yo moms..so there's no reason for me to put u on death-10/8 (detonate)
cuz ur loss is set n ur gay..so i'll put ur mouth on this shotty while droolin
n u wanted me to play mime-sis just to touch quiet wit body movements
it's opposite of soothing..u gettin slaughtered n on the corner you paying to flex
& you couldn't mal-come-for-tables even tho i just ate(8) u to(2) X (malcolm X)
never experienced sex unless you were the one that wuz payin,duh
cos lookin at wat's up be ur hobby with men while saying 'uuuhhhh' (uhhwatupb)
i'ma be sendin the wheel when u feel....the violence dat'll make u bend
and you got no chance/chants of winnin this cuz u losin in silence on-the-ends(audience)
ur in a cast,taddle no more cos in our last battle u got whored n fazed-n
to win?u wanted to jack-it..so there's no surprise u'd resort to swaying (jacket)
kill u dead from rage..n put ur head on page once I beat u to da books..u all blue
& even ur own boys wearin you out..so no wonder ur dawgs look to mall/maul you


2nd bar-his sig. has a qoute from einstein
Stein-a mug intended for serving beer

3rd bar-His location is pheonix.Pheonix is a legendary bird.Think.

4th bar-Memisis's birthday is on 10/8

6th bar-He's got a qoute from Malcolm X in his sig as well.X in roman numerals is 10.And 10 is equal to 8+2.Again..think.

7th bar-His Aim is "uhhwatupb"

8th bar-sway is a fabric used to make jackets as well.And if you been paying attention..you should know the rest of that bar.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-15-05 12:20 AM.

K fucking Trini -

When the fuck you going to learn that NOBODY wants you here?

You're a fucking bitch.

Check it out,

You think you got skills? Seriously, motherfucker, you're just lame dude
Was a Natural Killa... but then everybody hated you on that name too
So you made another alias.. you suck, im ill.. there's nothing switched
Yet you have no respect for women?
..kid, you ARE a fucking bitch
It's as simple as that.. you act like you're dope.. but man, i've had it
You only burn cats.. because you reported 9th Degree for harassment
That shit is fucking pathetic.. you lose to cats when I've whored 'em
You been bordering wack so much.. mexicans have taken over the forum
So come with your quotes and bullshit.. your still screwed in this fight
The good heads come togther..
..you get rejected from every crew on the site
You do got some dope punches though.. like you was holding fighters
Cause you are still the most respected.. in the fucking multi cypher
You fucking suck.. but you still don't think all of my wins are clear?
Your concepts won't rear over mine.. but they sure as hell are rear
This ain't a fucking joke.. for real, everything I've wrote has owned
I ain't fucking a round bitch..
..but you do every time your girl goes to your home
Ain't respected here.. haven't done shit, now you're gonna lose this
But you are the first idiot to provide all of the proof.. to where YOU bit
You ain't worth any more time.. all your lines are just keeping harmless
Man, I'm only gassed up because I'm just not used to eating garbage

Fuck you, motherfucker.

Lmao @ how forced all of your wordplay is.

Wow.

Damn...endlessK-trini Lines. I shoulda known

I bet you don't even know wat forced wordplay is..

tell me ur defintion of forced wordplay...

Using all this..

cos i'll cut ur leg-end-eerie to give u a bird-in so u'll be pheonix

Leg-end-eerie doesn't even sond like legendary. The whole idea of separating up words to try and make them resemble another word so your pathetic attempt to make it wordplay is 'forced wordplay.' "Leg end eerie" doesn't look or resemble "legendary" at all.

Considering that's what your whole verse is like..

It's all forced wordplay.

wordplay has to match sllyably...and has to make sence on both sides.

legendary

legend/leg-end...when i split this part up..this wuz word fission..
ary/eerie...this was homophones.

and u wanna go sayin my whole verse sucks?

look at yours.Your verse was a recap of all the personals i've had used against me in my old battles as k-trini.

That's not what wordplay is. Say "leg-end-eerie" out loud. "leg end eerie" sounds nothing like "legendary."

But, lol @ my verse sucking? You came with some more played nameplays (do you really think separating my name into 'mime sis' is original?).. you brought some more random quotes.. you overfilled your verse with multis, which ended up totally ruining any decent concept you could have though.. your punches didn't connect, because your wordplay was so fucking forced that it ruined the whole bar.. all of your personals were played (except the one about the quote.. because that was just gay).. you had NO good concepts.. because everything else in your verse bombed any potential that could have come from then.

You.. fucking.. suck..

*sigh*..w/e..i'll respond to you tomorrow..i got to go to bed cuz i got skool 2 morrow.

good battle anyways....

not gonna vote jus gonna say deranged stop usin the wack wordplay it messes up the verse and its not really wordplay

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Lmao. I told you.

Your wordplay is fucking trash.