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01-31-05, 01:47 AM | #1 | |||||
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CarsonJet Diss, "U Don't Belong Here"
IP: 6C15 4D51
This is dedicated to CarsonJet
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/babyosirismusic.htm You dont belong here... You belong reading the rules... then your threads wont get closed so often
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01-31-05, 01:54 AM | #2 | |||||||
Ask About Me
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IP: B336 E849
intro is weak.....carsonjet is not wack......<<not d/r just facts
this seemed like your reading from your screen anyway you need lots more emotion....also raise your voice and try to get your lisp fixed..... that shit is mad distracting.... you lyrics where nice but your flow was oof in some points...try to memorize atleast some of your lines....also you biggest downfall is your dubbing....you need to lower that volume and add a echo..... all in all you are good at text but need alot of elevation in audio....
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01-31-05, 06:27 AM | #3 | |||||
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IP: FE61 1311
sup this was pretty cool. Flow was nice in my opinion. Luved the beat too. I dont know or care if dude u talkin about is actually wack or not, but this track was cool.
Peace PS. since u was callin everyone wack at the end of the track u know u gonna get some hate, so ha...be ready
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01-31-05, 07:22 AM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 34D2 D886
ha this track was str8... your lyrics were good, your deliver was kinda iffy, but you got your point across and your flow was on point in every aspect.. solid diss.. i wanna hear carson's response to this.. very interesting.
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