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Old 01-29-04, 01:24 PM   #1
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FiorZ and M.O.C (Ceaseless) - Keepin' It Captured

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peep this track...............

m.o.c ask'd me to jump on it so i did........
1st verse - m.o.c
2nd verse - FiorZ

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Old 01-29-04, 02:03 PM   #2
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simple ass beat... this the best i ever heard from moc... on the real, u elevated... lyrics is ok.. flow is on.. fiori nice shit dawg... could be better, but lyrics is your usual par.. not much really to say, nothing too spectacular... 1
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Old 01-29-04, 03:00 PM   #3
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^thanx man

thaz aight keep on we want mo feedback
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Old 01-29-04, 03:23 PM   #4
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yeah i was waiting for the beat to drop.

1st verse
i see some exp. in flow in here. so i give you that. the lyrics were... kind of battle oreinted... so it's ight at times.. but it's always mediocre... it was a decent drop being.. it really didn't have a beat.

2nd verse
the flow was off and on. wasn't really feeling the lyrics in the secind verse.

overall.. it was decent. focus more on some more up-to-date lyrics... and a couple of multis wouldn't hurt.
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Old 01-29-04, 03:24 PM   #5
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Old 01-29-04, 03:47 PM   #6
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^man jus click at fiorz audiolink
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Mankind is frightfully inventive when coming up with the means for killing someone


..:audio:..

I ain't claimin' "I'm so hood, I'm so gangstuh.."
but that ain't no reason for me to not fuck you up...



Voice Of Tha Streets


FiorZ feat. Ceaseless


me vs. Chryme~son
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Old 01-31-04, 12:41 PM   #7
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uppin for feed...........................................
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Old 01-31-04, 01:04 PM   #8
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the beat is simple...I was waiting for a change-up or something...
The flow is there for ol boi on the second verse..lyrics kinda simple though..standard battle stuff..

It's decent, kinda different beat...
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Old 02-02-04, 09:04 AM   #9
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????...First dude is untamed with his flow...Yes it is simple and the beat is even more dry...So I commend you for ridin this one...Your flow is better than what ol boy's was...You spit some decent sh*t..."Like you're a turkey gettin plucked". I don't know what it is about that but I liked it...I need to hear some songs from you man...I would rate this a 4/10...Decent enough...
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Old 02-03-04, 01:01 PM   #10
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^^jus hit the link in ma sig.............
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