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**FLEx** | 0 | 0% | |
DV8 | 5 | 100.00% | |
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08-04-04, 11:00 PM | #1 |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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**FLEx** vs DV8
IP: 88E6 6CAA
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6 - 10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting need 100 posts to vote if you vote explain or don't bother voting/explained votes will be returned asap goo'luck.. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 11:30 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
08-04-04, 11:03 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 11:03 PM.
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08-04-04, 11:03 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 10D2 D962
**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 11:03 PM.
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08-04-04, 11:17 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 10D2 D962
I'm a simple person who accepts a simple culture//
so i'll leave you out to dry and deal with the vultures// they call me the farmer cuz i harvest girls like agriculture/ You stepped up to the plate and that i respect// except you'll strike out and go back on deck// you'd better protect your neck, you'd be wrecked// ill professionally inspect and intersect this direct peck// it'll only take a sec.// you're so full of hot air it must be inflamation// this battle is easier that beating Michael J. Fox at operation// good luck |
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08-04-04, 11:41 PM | #5 |
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
“flex”ya head ta ass be’in brave tryin ta battle like your somekind’ve hero,
Getting canned like trash,cause I hexed ya text record n its stayin at zero, supceptable ta“severd limbs”spear his temple so his mentals aren’t trapped, amputead while I put”CAPS on fists”ta render his punches”hand-e-capped, aint a “dick” so u aint gonna ’beat’ me with that hand lotion, you kno im real, yo kid ya not slick typing with ‘vaseline’ n tryin ta elevate with those ‘high heels’, My keystyles putting ya in denial~rapverse knows smoking this herb a’int a sin, Here’s a catchphrase“your played”like reruns of”jepordy”we already kno who wins, This kids froze n pissin, hestates ta leave like a “shook tree” in a “paused movie” Rewind “press decline” my lines are more effective than the ”shrink” in a jakuzzi, if ya don't get some lines ..don't vote cause they all make sense..... |
08-04-04, 11:56 PM | #6 |
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
damn i thought it was gonna be tougher than that..i woudnt've came so hard if i knew...
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08-05-04, 01:14 PM | #7 |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
uppin 4 votes peeps..................................
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08-05-04, 04:29 PM | #8 |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
uppin............................................. .....
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08-05-04, 08:27 PM | #9 |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
damn your fuckin sleeping alot.........................
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08-05-04, 09:16 PM | #10 | |
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IP: BEB6 7795
Voted For: DV8
Not breaking down lines this time, no need Flex-a mixed up structure...it flowed nice, but i didnt like the way it was setup...no hard punches or personals...more self glorifyin than punches...weak battle...elevate DV8-Nice opener and kept the structure and punches constant, one of your better battles i've seen...some ok wordplay in there...i like the high heels/elevate wordplay...overall good drop
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08-05-04, 09:23 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: **FLEx**
yo lol da last line lmfao, good drop to both of u, uh its basically broke down yo punches, structre-Dv8 flo-Flex wordplay-Dv8 Vocab-Flex punches-Flex close battle dawg v/Flex Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-06-04, 03:17 AM | #12 |
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
uppin for explained votes...........................
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08-06-04, 03:29 AM | #13 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: DV8
okay nice i gota go with dv8 yo he came real creative on dis wun...and flex da 3 line thing fukks up ya flow dogg opener-dv8 structure-flex punchlines-dv8 creativity-dv8 multis-dv8 he had a few personals-dv8 da shit about flex record enjoyed-dv8.....he took dis wun with his punches and creativty..flex u ahd a good structure but none of ya lines stood out nothin hit hard..pause RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS R IN MY SIG BOTH OF YA'LL
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08-06-04, 02:29 PM | #14 |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
uppin............................................. ....
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08-06-04, 02:47 PM | #15 | |
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: DV8
sTUCTURE: FLEX Multies: DV8 Puches: DV8 Personals - neither Vocab - DV8 overall - DV8 Ok DV8 i vote for you.. first of all, flex' first three lines fucked him up because it was self-glorification.. next his punchlines after that were limited and only ones didn't hit.. your though did connect in some spots and your multies were cool too.. it helped your flow and your set ups and punches outshined his.. stcture could of been better, but in this case you didn't need it.. V/DV8 return favor in my thread please, will you? thanx, here's the link.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138484 |
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