Whats good everyone? Just did this track this morning, put a ruff mix on it. lookin for some feed plz. will rtf, just drop a link. thnx in advance...

the song is "I Love It"

www.soundclick.com/7curse






http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2788720

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2788721

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"Its not poker, but ill break ya ass wit one hand "

Beat is different, not too bad.

YOu have a decent flow but it seems like your vocals are monotone and drowned by the beat, sounds a bit muffled so i cant hear the lyrics properly, second verse is better flow and packed with multis.

not bad mate.

RTF here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230519

....thnx. uppp^

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"Its not poker, but ill break ya ass wit one hand "

sounds like a lil more vocal presence would help here...

beat is coo

flow is continuous without switchups

delivery is consistent, but monotonous


not sure bout the hook...lol

WTH


interesting sounding track bro

Keep at it

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Intros ok, beats cool, flows on, sounds like your whispering, which causes a lack emotion bro, unless this is the style you were looking for.
lol @ the hook,its original, originality is dope. FX could be lowered a few clicks.
Lyrics are all good, main thing im not feeling is the vocals on the whisper tip.

But yeh,decent.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231240

RTF ^^^ on that for me mayne

i love the beat its grimey as fuck... true hip hop like..... you layin your flow down constant on this .... smooth solid... delivery is dope... lol swagger like whoa... id love to see you and Ebrics do a track together... yall styles are madd similar... lol ... its bugged out.... but yo... for real... this is hot... underground vibe but this is hip hop... most def something for a play list for the flow alone.. props..
8.5/10

holla at me for a collab... and get at me PM's so we can talk shop

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

thnx for feed yall, keep it coming. (and yea...FX are def a lil too loud).

(im considering re-recording the track vocals, anyone suggest otherwise?)

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"Its not poker, but ill break ya ass wit one hand "

rtf mate .

up up up...will rtf

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"Its not poker, but ill break ya ass wit one hand "

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231325

rtf bro.

up up up................................

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"Its not poker, but ill break ya ass wit one hand "

Wow.....I don't think anyone noticed the breath control on this one. Shit had me pretty amazed. Good shit man.......you just need to get some clearer vocals and maybe take a couple more takes when recording cause there a couple of mumbles here and there which was due to the never ending flow....lol.

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thnx for noticing Enygma....but i cheated the system for breath control. i record 2 bars at a time. thats why urll notice every 2nd bar is a lil louder on the last word, cuz thats where im coming in for the next 2 bars. ppl tend to not like hearing others breath on hip hop trax....

o well, any more takers? plz rip this track a new one...itll only sound betta if u tell me what sux

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"Its not poker, but ill break ya ass wit one hand "

def. need to be a lil more loud when you spit...your presence is lacking some....

lyrics are coo....

uhh i dunno bout this hook man...just a lil weird to me....dunno....

flow is coo....only thing i can really say is to up your presence...its killin you

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