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10-30-06, 09:38 PM
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J-Mill - When I'm Dead
IP: 48C5 C14C
This track waz actually made about a month ago but i wanted to give yall a taste of my shit!
Concept: About how people wanna hate when ur alive, but when u die they act like they were ur best friend and they say they loved u n shit when they really hated on ya the whole time u were alive. Hi-Fi:http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4470903&q=hi Lo-Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4470903&q=lo Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3099806 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3099805 Holla at me fo collabs!! |
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10-30-06, 11:12 PM
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IP: 35C4 4E41
this hurts my ears. ur flow needs massive work, i dont like ur sound that much...and the mix is terrible. the hook needs to b re-written...ehhhh
good concept...but retry the whole thing. not tryin to b a dick...but u need to get back to basics and re-look at everything
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10-31-06, 12:03 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 48C5 C14C
appr. feed
uppin |
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10-31-06, 12:10 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 001C 5107
I liked the intro I am def. feeling that shit
def. didn't hurt my ears but u def. got some work to do my dude....you gotta put more emotion and pressense into that shit.....i'm serious u got potential ur lyrics are real good shit keep it up |
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10-31-06, 12:20 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 48C5 C14C
^^rele appr. that feed
i noticed that 2 though my energy is shitty i deff gotta step dat up thanx uppin |
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10-31-06, 12:27 AM
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inFAMOUS
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IP: 5043 32F4
you need a new name. forreal. J-Mill? J-Millz? |
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10-31-06, 02:48 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 553B 235D
ight ya voice is coo i like the intro but the quality is down in it......u need better flow sounds so choppy smooth it out......kinda borin i like the rhymescheme tho.... emotion n presence is needed u sound like u got no confidence hook needs a lil worrk overall pretty decent man rtf
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10-31-06, 04:40 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 48E8 2135
yo man u gotta up ya emotion.........practice ya verse in front of a mirror and see how ya would deliver it man........
ya flow is choppy at some parts...with a slow flow like the one u took u must up ya delivery and make it interesting..... quality it is what it is...but it's not that bad it's peakin at some certain parts.... Overall - u got potential like PT said but ya gotta work on ya flow..count syllables...spit ova and ova till it flows together....aiite man...keep ya head up man.... pz ~1~
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10-31-06, 10:02 PM
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IP: 48C5 C14C
appr. dat that waz a rele good peace of feed black dragon
n thanx to tha others that left feed im takin everythang into consideration uppin |
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