Ikynoevel (East Coast) Vs. R-rated (West Coast)


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10-30 Lines
I Will Decide The Topic
No Biting
No Recycling
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Topic Is...Your tied up and forced to watch a group of people torture and kill the person closest to you, mention who it is and the emotions that you go through and describe what they do to the person.

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

fuck man yall gotta notifie people i didnt even remember signing up for this

R-Rated should be dq'd from this battle due to the fact that he went over the line limit

but just incase he doesnt get DQ'd then i guess this 15 minute key will have to do




..*Puts head down in pain*..
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Loud noises.. the laughter.. my sweat is drippin..
My love is hanging dead.. right were they left me Sittin..

Dear God,
Since ive been famous we dont speak much But Shits hott..
And i cant Reach Out.. At least not with both of my wrist Lock'd
Im watchin a nightmare.. Stephanie My one u could say..
The game was over.. that very minute she won me That Day
This chair is rock hard.. Sorta like the rock in my throat...
They tied her neck N pushed and i just watch'd her Choke.
These men were serious.. but i dont have a clue Im blank..
like my expression as im bout the blow when they shoot the tank
Ive been wit my love for 10 years.. its so hard to grasp..
Like my afternoon shadow whenever it doesnt do what i ask
2 minutes go by.. she's still and everyone is out of sight.
I pray for steph but i kno she's in the light thats now to bright
My rap career is over... Fuck my money my jewels and house
Like the umpire wit the signal My pain just Rules Them out..!
I say more prayers while i speak i kno she's Passin grace..
Just then i look ahead and suddendly i see Aston's Face..
He told me that was a fake manican made just like skin...
He puts his arm around my shoulder and says uve been punk'd again
Im so surprised all the tears i cried Durin that whole while..
then Steph walks out hard headed.. rockin' a Great Big Smile!..
My mind just bottom'd out Starting wit the Trunk in the rear..
The next day i got an award.. for receivin the Punk of the year!

Hmmmm....NewPort did'nt realli stay on topic...He lacked Vocab which R-Rated Beat him in...
Newport-Off Topic-Lack of Vocab-Was'nt realliy complex,

R-Rated- Good Piece-Had better Vocab, Nice concept's Much more Complex, Good Multie's but they were'nt realli relevant if you know what i mean...

Vote/R-Rated.

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r-rated got this....you went over line limit but i was feelin ya drop more..
lol...ya closer was aight...no multi's but alot of single syllable inner ryhmes..
helped with flow even though you lost yaself with some of the vocab, it did'nt
always make sense...still good drop though..
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conclusion learn what a multi is..lol...go to omb's tutorial...pc
^jus thought ide tell you...lol

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!