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Old 10-05-09, 05:56 PM   #1
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Baltimore come up (give me feedback pros and cons)

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Old 10-10-09, 06:39 PM   #2
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Let me mix your shit, this could be dope with some solid mixing.
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Old 10-11-09, 03:35 AM   #3
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o alright ..mix it I wanna see what u can do
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Old 10-11-09, 11:40 AM   #4
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i left this feed on ya youtube pageVVV rtf on a track of mine

black president, still no changes! thanx for spittin some dope shit. ya quality needs help for sure, but this is dope. flow stays on point the whole time, kids gettin shot, i know where the grave is. i'mma say a line like that.
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of course the quality needs mixed on ya vocals, but besides that, u could extend your rhymin words a little bit more to put more swag on it, so it'd be catchier for the pop people who'd rather not listen to real shit. gotta trick'um ya dig
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Old 10-11-09, 10:21 PM   #5
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good lookin..I appreciate it
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Old 10-18-09, 03:30 AM   #6
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damn you're madddddddddddddddddddddd young... or atleast that's the impression I get from your voice, listening... the beat is cool, very nice mellow lay back sh!t..... flow is pretty decent, the lyrics are pretty decent aswell... nice little concept you have here, quality is decent aswell... the gun shot pissed me off cuz I was rocking the head phones, and the little sample seemed unnecessary ... but still, you did this up... keep dropping
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Old 10-23-09, 02:30 AM   #7
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naw my dude..im 19 and good lookin on the feedback
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