Just a track to check out. If you must hate, a little constructive criticism from you would be alot better than you being a tool.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=473211

It's whatev, this song is from like, March of 2008. I just picked out a random song to post lol

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3259105

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242580

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beat made by speats eh? thats dope ...
feelin' it ...
ok ... so the flow on this is pretty tight ...
lyrics are nothin' special here.. but feelin' this topic.
hook: this was pretty dope hook. fit the track well.

yeah lyrics are pretty much the same here .. just stayin' on topic flowin' well...good shit buddy.

7/10 - overall track.

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Never been one to get fancy with the lyrics... just tell the story, that's what I do lol

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i really liked this hook here kinda asher roth type shit.voice and flow are cool.beat is decent.lyrics could be much better but this is decent.i can listen to it and thats much more then i can say about most these kids on here.

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Thanks bro, appreciate it

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its not always about da complexity of da lyrics

sometimes u have to just admire the beauty and sincerity of the story being told

this is why this is close to classic

9.25/10

one day you kids will understand da way robby doin his thing lol

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I like it man. The story telling is nice. I like the flow for the most part, pretty good tempo.

I like this .

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thanks guys, appreciate the feedback.

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I love this Anno beat.

Flow comes in pretty solid. Quality is terrible but meh. Flow does fall off sometimes, but nothing bad. Delivery was a tad monotone and quiet, but its fitting. Hook is actually pretty good.

We may have to do a track man. I can mix your shit way better.

Beat switches up....

Evil shit, but I must say I hate the effect on that voice.

Overall a really solid track actually man, took me by surprised. Lyrically you're good, and you have the technique.

Props. Good work.

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Hey thanks bro.

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Its pretty cool, quality is shit for real.......but this could be dope.

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Damn you still have this beat wow lol

I have a stockpile of them lol

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