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Old 11-02-03, 04:45 AM   #1
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Can any1 help me out

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hey i just need some tips and shit for writing better battles
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Old 11-02-03, 04:48 AM   #2
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well first off........ u needa rhyme
once u get that down well moce to the basics
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Old 11-02-03, 04:49 AM   #3
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arent there like differnt kinds of rhyming
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Old 11-02-03, 04:50 AM   #4
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umm are u fucked or sum shit
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Old 11-02-03, 04:50 AM   #5
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what you mean ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 11-02-03, 04:51 AM   #6
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yes there is...well wow your a smart one huh..

theres metaphorical rhyming..an so on

u can have a rhyme like

hear my gun go bang//
cum on ya face wit my son name the Wang

Or basic nursery rhyming which is gay now dayz an wont get u a win.........

anything else kid
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Old 11-02-03, 04:52 AM   #7
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what is a puch line......i dont understand completly
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Old 11-02-03, 04:53 AM   #8
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can you like do some examples or someshay
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Old 11-02-03, 04:53 AM   #9
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rymein isn't wat sounds the same.... rymein has same amout of sylobles, and wat u can make it sound like.... but that comes to poor judjment... thats y textin is so hard... some people just can't feel er flow or sum shit... but ya their is diffrent kinds off rymein... it's like a unique style, everyone got one; some poeple just don't know the others style
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Old 11-02-03, 04:55 AM   #10
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so......foucs on the syables when wrting down shit on this site to win battles
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and punchlines are lines that will cut the opponent deep, get to their nerves and hert them emotionaly or physicly
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exactly a PUNCh is

well peep all my battles ill have one or 2 or three punches in
More Punches the better..
there basically metaphors that Hit hard..


Like

u soundin tite at rap//
is like mikeal jackson actin blak.. u no....

OR ya rap games mediocore//
ya chances of beatin me is like a fag in a game of strate poker..


u no
shit like dat kid
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Old 11-02-03, 04:57 AM   #13
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like making fun of them
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Old 11-02-03, 04:57 AM   #14
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u can also hav mulites
where are
rhymes in the middle ofya lines
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so......foucs on the syables when wrting down shit on this site to win battles


ya if u saw some battles have last words like:

or-take - mistake
asshole - dark-poll

shit like dat u know what im sayin dawg
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