i think you could've re wrote that oint and made it harder km they way u laid it out was defenitley way too much i liked the concept but it came out wrong, on the second note aphills joint was super simple but i got it and when you read it to yourself it's kinda funny but still a lil week you almost killed ya self aphill but any way my vote still goes to aphill for the cleaner more straight foward punch

vote aphill

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