Down time remains while tha clock ticks, but manic as fuck i cant stop spitz
It happenz when my complex has gone blitz, then my demonz drop clickz
Dream on; the dirtiest are waitin hoes, aint even happen yet; tha case closed
Till ive defeated ya childish game foes, doctors baffle over satan exposed
2 stay smokin treez; i sawed acres, I stay puttin down a G; ya'll fakerz
My interrogation burns; i thaw traitors, turned chin checkin to jaw breakerz
Pullin on tha draw; donz quicker, shootin all out on tha scotch liquer
escapin; watched tha cops flicker, tha dopest headz here aint drop sicker
I stayed livin to smoke em high, god knows i fucked the ocean dry
Lookin for the devil in a hopeless sky, 3 steps from reality I'm loced 2 die

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nice except you need to cut your lines a bit more......your rhyming is average so you need to up your skill on that as wel as vocab....rtf on my OM change of mind

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i feel ya but this 1 was more of a... exactly what i wanted to say....

i'll post something a little more vocab later