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12-09-07, 03:30 AM | #1 | |||||
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An Author Out Of The Write Mind..
IP: 2B2D 76F7
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244906
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244900 Bloody Floors From Cruddy Gore Placed On The Scene Delt A Fragrance That Peeled Nostrils Once Embraced From A Breeze Tho Stable it seemed Faces Had Gleamed and gaped upon this cadaver swaying through God's drift with raw skin disolving in layers Left Slaughtered In Plain Dirt Was An Author Who Changed Earth Giving Art To The Brain Of Children..For Thoughts To Remain Terse Arnold's Unlaundered Grey Shirt Was Stained With The Blood That Was Once Geared To Write Passionate Of Paths These Kids Uncovered From BLunt Fears Some Would succumb Tears Reacting To The Outcomes And Tragedies Whether Clouds Spun On Happy Themes,The Pouts Brung A Max To Means When Published His books Werent An Average Read More Like Shadowing Life Into A Capsule Of Strife,Euphoria,Or Maybe Fantasies With Castles And Knights By Any Chance Probably The Future And What Holds For Our World Many Chapters Were As Deep As The Pacific Ocean,Creating Poems As Their Pearls Emotionally Twirled,It Was Like All Focus Altered This Writers Distinct Bed Where Later He Was Buried By Crowds Who's Tears Ran Similar How His Ink Bled Just Think Death Could Really Make Someone View Your Green Thumb's Mood In mind Inspite Of Being A Ruined Idol,The question Is Was The Case Murder?, Or suicide? Confused With Lines? I wouldnt Want You Fooled Into Stealth But To Close The Book,The Only Human Arnold Couldnt Reach Out To..Was Himself
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12-09-07, 06:42 AM | #2 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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IP: 65E3 9A1F
this was a good drop,didnt really like the subject personally,but ur flow was cool,structure was sound,great imagination+word play.8.5/10 at its worst.peace
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12-09-07, 11:01 AM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 2B2D 76F7
thanks for the feed man..really appreciate it
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12-09-07, 11:24 AM | #4 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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IP: 65E3 9A1F
no worries,im jus starting at this,need help wiv improving my shit,so could ya leave sum feed on mine cheers.oh and go easy jokes lol
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12-09-07, 11:29 AM | #5 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 2B2D 76F7
alright no problem.
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12-11-07, 03:14 PM | #6 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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IP: 491C 8E9B
any1 gonna leave a bloody comment??????????
this was a good drop,show sum luv fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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12-13-07, 04:09 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 252C 385D
It was ight...Nothing special but had flow, You british? "bloody comment?"
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