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Old 11-08-04, 09:41 PM   #1
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A1C .vs. Frein-Ma$ter

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^4 votes...and maybe youll be as ill as him^

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Old 11-09-04, 05:15 PM   #2
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Old 11-09-04, 06:14 PM   #3
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Old 11-10-04, 03:49 PM   #4
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Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week
Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin
& made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin
But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch?
We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit
So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg
But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job
Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick
While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick
Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me
Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery

Blah
12 lines match it
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Old 11-10-04, 06:28 PM   #5
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k heres my spit......

yo,

yo,

I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE.
My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE.
A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR,
Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS.
Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews',
I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS..
Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE,
Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE.
Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT,
Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!..

murked.........

UPPPPIN fo votes now.....
 
Old 11-10-04, 06:51 PM   #6
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Upppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn This>>>>>>>>>>>>>>!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
 
Old 11-11-04, 09:39 AM   #7
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Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week
nah
Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin
& made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin
meh
But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch?
We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit
meh
So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg
But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job
no
Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick
While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick
kay I guess
Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me
Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery
blah





I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE.
My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE.
no
A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR,
Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS.
nice try
Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews',
I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS..
no way
Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE,
Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE.
nah
Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT,
Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!..
no


Vote A13 for having one not compltely whack line
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Old 11-11-04, 11:19 AM   #8
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Both came pretty wack, but A1C came less wack.

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Old 11-11-04, 04:14 PM   #9
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ur both herbs and dont know wat wordplay is ......and next time kid expplain ur vote.........

uppppin and if u dont know wat wordplay is or juust a stupid kid .....dont vote
 
Old 11-11-04, 04:59 PM   #10
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A1C:
Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week
ehh...decent personal i guess...
Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin
& made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin
ehh...
But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch?
We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit
no
So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg
But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job
lol...aight...
Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick
While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick
blah...
Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me
Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery
that's true about the lottery...decent closer...


frein-ma$ter:
I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE.
My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE.
meh...
A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR,
Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS.
ehh...prolly coulda been worded better...
Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews',
I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS..
lol...okay
Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE,
Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE.
meh...
Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT,
Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!..
okay...but meh as a closer...

i thought this battle was real close...this shit was tough to vote on...
A1C definitely had the personals here, but i think frein had a slight edge on punches cuz the concepts behind 'em were less common...both had multis, but frein had more...other than that, they were about even...overall, like i said, it was close...but,

V/ frein...i thought he had the slight edge over A1C here...good battle...
 
Old 11-11-04, 05:46 PM   #11
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k its 1-1 since other guy didnt explain his vote.........

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Old 11-12-04, 12:39 AM   #12
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vote: Frien


yo nice flow through out....... a lot of multis and laughable punches..... this was a hard battle to call..... but frein edged this one out with multies, cuz everything else was pretty much a tie as far as punches go....

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Old 11-12-04, 09:06 AM   #13
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Not a great battle but my vote is for Fren.
He gives an attempt to throw harder punches, and a little wordplay. Also he tried using some metas here and there. Most of it doesnt hit hard but its a tad step up from A's verse.
Its a win by only a slim margin tho, becuz lines like this:
Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE.
are not hardhitting at all.

vote fren
 
Old 11-12-04, 10:02 AM   #14
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v/ a1c

frein had nothing but wordplay. . an i'd seen all but one or two of them before. . a1c or w/e his name is had one or two more original lines.
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Old 11-12-04, 10:14 AM   #15
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frein sort ya structure out. whats-with-spittin-LIKE-THIS?

anyway,

a1c

A1C:
Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week
ehh, decent enough personal...
Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin
& made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin
nope...
But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch?
We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit
blah...
So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg
But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job
nice punch, i guess...
Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick
While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick
nah, not feelin it...
Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me
Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery
Ok...nice closer.

Frein-Master

frein-ma$ter:
I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE.
My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE.
blah..
A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR,
Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS.
Ok...decent
Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews',
I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS..
your best bar
Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE,
Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE.
nope...
Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT,
Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!..
blah...bad closer, wasn't strong enough.

Ok, close battle but i think A13 edge'd this just. first off, frein ya structure wasn't great. Whats with all the caps and dashes. If ya have good multies ya don't need 'em. A had a couple of nice lines wheras frein all i could see from u was the bad news one, that wern't great neither. a wins with a better structure and a few "nice" punches.

v/ A13
 
 


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