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Old 08-17-05, 10:14 AM   #1
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yea its like i been away for a minute..but just turn ya speakers up and listen to this...

left feed on..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204358
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204675


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=208058

Track is called Whats That Life Like...its basically about how the life of a signed artist would be..

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Old 08-17-05, 11:17 AM   #2
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Send me this fucking beat...

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But anyways...

Beat is dope as fuck...Lyrical wise, this is really good, quality is near perfection. Flow kinda slips in a few parts...But overall, you rode this beat really good...Hook is straight..Actually, its dope, Im feeling the hook. I dont know what else to say man. Good job.

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Old 08-17-05, 11:20 AM   #3
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ay im bout to peep this...just gimme a few
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Old 08-17-05, 11:53 AM   #4
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ah'ight.........nice beat choice........common on mixtapes but still solid.......ok flow on 1st is good but the rhyme scheme is very uninspired coulda been more creative with that an the delivery has emotion but not enuff.....then hook comes up....now that takes the emotion up it was koo...but not as catchy as it shoulda been...2nd verse......flow is koo once again the delivery is stronger on this verse....lyrics is decent on both verses but the topic is generic as well as your approach to it, you coulda been more creative an more hype with this but its good enuff to get by as is....overall 7/10......stay up son........1
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Old 08-17-05, 01:24 PM   #5
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LMAO...the track that started me on my Journey last year

yea I love this beat

holy spit!


ur flow is good...but I agree with Trip that ur rhyme scheme could come up


solid track

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Old 08-17-05, 08:02 PM   #6
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aight yall uppin...
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Old 08-17-05, 10:17 PM   #7
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beat is nice....my life styles p right?

word flow is on point, lyrics are nice, i think this is a mixtape track
word rhyme scheme could switch up, but i'm feeling this...nice keep dropping em
hook is catchy.....whats that like, get paid to do me...word
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Old 08-17-05, 10:47 PM   #8
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word i peeped this shit on AIM:

quality is dopeness...almost studio
lyrics are nice...^word to voke could c this on a mixtape 4shp
flow is nice...rhymeechme needs switchin up
hook is ctachy as a mofo..

keep em comin dnt keep us waitin another 6mnths 4 a track nigga...1
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Old 08-17-05, 10:51 PM   #9
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Like I said yesterday. Quality is perfect. The flow didn't go off once if I heard right. Shits funny Cause I was just listenin to that joe budden "So long and goodbye" track where he basically say the exact opposite of what you sayin'. Lol I like this shit and the beat obviously ill. I was spose to be on this but yeah my quality ..__..
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Old 08-17-05, 11:15 PM   #10
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Solid track man-quality is up, lyrically good, nice flow...liking the hook too, definately mixtape worthy.1
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Old 08-17-05, 11:42 PM   #11
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ahaha i like dis track seriously...got damn boi tha flow was nice imma critical person as alot of u kno but i cant complain about this track.....keep it up...all i gotta say is Vocab is key!! lol keep it up kiddo
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Old 08-18-05, 01:58 AM   #12
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You got talent man, aint nobody can say different..
I would play this type of stuff to chill to & I can imagine you getting pretty far if you play your cards right in this industry. Just make sure your always moving forward and never let other peoples goals get in the way of achieving your ambitions.
As for this song--
Vocals sound good, flow is pro & lyrics worked well enough, personally I dont think being a signed artist would be a stress free life.. But I know where your commin from.. Remember to keep tellin me when you put new shit out cause I'm interested in checking more of ya stuff as its uploaded bro..

Good shit.
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Old 08-18-05, 03:39 AM   #13
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aight good lookin..uppin
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Old 08-18-05, 10:45 AM   #14
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u bitches...
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Old 08-18-05, 02:36 PM   #15
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im feeling it
quality is perfect, we all know that...
but weerd its a hot track
nice flow throughout the whole thing, couldnt really find any parts it fell off....at least significantly....
hook is kinda coo, but i agree with trip when he said it couldve been more catchy...
lyrics is solid, i like the track concept too....
i dont think the beat is that amazing though, but w/e aint a big deal
nice shit man, real solid track...
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