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Old 10-03-09, 08:51 PM   #1
Its CJ
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Jmedz-Introstyle ft. its cj

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( Its CJ )
All i need is time...time time time
all day everyday park on my grind
try to make my money thats all thats on my mind
bunch of fucking distractions on the sides
on my way up
bottom to the sides
slippn in passed them
bottle bitches up
serve them then trash them
sins i commit
my pleas for faith
jmedz our flows are chased my mind is crazy
lost and cant be traced
google it search it no results found
try to bite my shit
sniff it like a hound
down on the ground holding up my crown
im king of the world silence bitch dont make a sound
your ears are bleeding, my words shoot rounds
down in the ground with a casket round it

eh hah

yo
jmedz
uh huh
yo


ima murder this beat
put it in the ground
WOW
understanding me is like mass murdering a town
how? what who where and when
all these questions asked again
they all praise me the hip hop world always trying to commit my sins
But
ima beat killer that is what i do i take two knock a fucking birdie
but this beat is what i gave to you
it sticks like glue in your mind all the time
inside hah yes
higher then the rest
son they always try to get with C
because jmedz on this fucking beat
i kill them like i kill them got this uzi
looking like swiss cheese
....and more i just dont feel like typing it.
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Old 10-03-09, 08:55 PM   #2
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This Was Good Shit Here If It Was An Audio Piece, Wasn't Really Feeling It As Text Cause The Easy Vocab And Structure And Shit...I Think You Should Drop It In Audio It'll Be Better Bro....For Sure
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Old 10-03-09, 09:17 PM   #3
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2 links or fuck off!!!!!
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Old 10-03-09, 10:33 PM   #4
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ok thanks ill put a link up this was freestyled too we should be re recording it but who knows. quality of my mic is horrible his is nice.

http://www.myspace.com/jmedz93 - There you go.quality of my mic is horrible his is nice.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248535
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248497
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Old 10-03-09, 11:05 PM   #5
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Yea I Could Hear You Guys But Barely...One Thing I Did Notice Is That Some Of The Flow Was Off Beat For Both Of You Like You Tried Forcing The Flow To The Beat...Didn't Work Out To Good The Beat Was Good Though Bro...But Maybe Try Fixing Some Parts To Make The Flow Fluent....
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Old 10-04-09, 12:32 AM   #6
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2 links to other peoples open mics you have left feedback on, not two links to your other open mics.

why the fuck do I bother with the brainless?
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Old 10-04-09, 12:35 AM   #7
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infact, fuck it, this is weak and doesnt even deserve to be open. We dont want your lame freestyles that you for whatever reason, decided to post as a text open mic. we want dope, thought out text peices. Artisticly worded and written.


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