10 Line Battle.
Usual House Rules.
You To Drop First Since You Offered.

dis is my check in....

everyone knows i'll leave this pommy queer quaking with fear
because every word i spit has bite like tyson going for an ear
it's fight night and like Clifford Etienne you going out round 1
you know your out son and you've being outdone KO the outcome
while you shouting all your lame rhymes giving all you got
u will be completly missing me like beckhams last penalty shot
and i can't work out how u can call yourself england's finest
everyone else can see your crap u must be suffering blindness
you just a wannabe blackman but you ain't even tanned son
and all of your lines are pre rehearsed like chingy's own AND1
and your a lot more then "one call away" from winning this fight
so as i watch you blow-me-twice the crowd will give me more cheers then obie trice

More L

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

yo more L,
HOW IT TAKE YOU 12 HOURS TO POST 10 LINES
i waited all day for you to drop.
aight amma checking in now. give me 20 mins then i`ll drop.
your pre writtens arnt going to save you from yet another loss.
like my sig says, THATS MY WURD!

Yo pommy dude,

U cant rush a verse like dat, dat was sic , good flow, great rhymes and good use of da whole english thing. More L, dis guy jus havin a cry coz he know he beat. Keep da rhymes comin man.

Lata,

Iverson

it didn't take me 12 hours i challenge last night n went to sleep den dis mourning i wrote da verse in like 5 mins...i didn't sign in to dis mourning so i didn't realiase u'd set it up...dat shite ain't pre written

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

yeah you right 886 you cant rush a verse like that.
thats why imma spend hours like he did. ( its jus fair)
i`ll check in later with my drop.

see u can't complain now more cause u've taken well over 12 hours to drop...cause it 's being 12 hours since my last post

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

OMG iverson u dickrider...u can't rush a verse like dat..wtf..now u givin the opposition an excuse to take longer!!!....if i waz more L i would battle ur ass...

Yo iverson ur such a dickryder its unbelivable u said u got more l all da way on this one u posted a fucking comment before i even spit!!!! I can't belive sum of these cats

can we get dis guy banned!

OMG dis is a joke u've had well over 24 hours to drop n still your silent..if u don't drop by tomorrow i win by forfeit!!!

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

yo Anima. you well got that bitch told fucking dickriding aussie.

yo More L. i know i siad i was going to take the piss but i didnt mean to take as long as i did, jus couldnt get on the comp yesterday that all.
anyway this is my check in i`ll drop wth in a half hour.

thought id try a diff concept. by the way it was a 10 line battle not 12.
aight ere goes.


My phrases bring praises and give nipples raises...
They send you through phases of dope lyrical crazes...
You'll be lost and dead in my mazes while your shit barely grazes...
I'll spit hatred at you, run your ass through, evil, like Hitler to a Jew!
Let my woman tease you with a screw, then leave your balls blue...
Inflict you like the flu, collect to me what's due, bang your girl named Sue...
Like Elvis, your heart will sieze, like Ebola, it's diseased...
I'm so cold, I freeze those on their knees trying to please!
So take heed and follow my lead, I've just planted a seed...
Son, you're deeply in need, your rhymes sickly bleed, you're stuck, like a cat that's been treed!

alright uppin for votes.........................................

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

this was a close and tight battle dawg both emcees were just sick More L had good punches but Riff Raff came back hard i had to read both verses three times to come with my decision i have to give this battle to Riff Raff his floes and rhyme scheme were a little bit better tha More L's Riff Raff hit you wit some tight ass multies also imma go wit Riff

vote-Riff Raff

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thanks lol.
aight, uppin this for more votes................
and hounest opinions.

onthis round im goin wit more L because he was usinn some good lines like the hole first half. i guess u have to wait to hear me.