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09-20-04, 01:47 PM

Ebircs

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Todays Man...

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Was jus thinkin n shit so...wrote up a lil sumthin n recorded it,i think it came out pritty good...as usual it coulda ben produced better but the lyrics an't clippin as much here

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/c...miwangmusic.htm

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09-20-04, 01:56 PM

The Jett

Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.

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I don't like it.

The hook was Garbage.
Your flow is horrible. Too choppy.

Topic wise an lyrical wise good.
Now u just have to transform the text to audio.
Work on your flow and voice. Seem like ur tryin too hard. -1

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