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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

Fucks a lay fear?

your mom does, bitch lolz

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Fear

^Bet you been planning that for a while, but I'll still be wreckin',
So I'll strike fear into a mirror...by threatening it with his reflection.

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Fear

The second punch is the same as mine, so I'll have you raped fuck,
And now you're death at mid-night will have the whole neighbourhood wake up.

ehhhhh....

Damn, at first i thought show would take it. 1st punch was straight, i liked the concept. a bit played but nicely worded.

Lay Fear, wow i think you've ellevated a lot. Some of your concepts are still played,
but i think your elevating nicely man. 1st punch was good, nice name play. And ok concept. 2nd punch was a good flip, a little on the simple side. But ok.

Show, this is where you lost it, i don't feel your 2nd punch was harsh at all. Terrible wording, concept alone was eh. Much better this week, but i still think

Lay pulled it v/Lay.

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

^Bet you been planning that for a while, but I'll still be wreckin',
So I'll strike fear into a mirror...by threatening it with his reflection.
played

The second punch is the same as mine, so I'll have you raped fuck,
And now you're death at mid-night will have the whole neighbourhood wake up.

meh


vs

Try?.....shit I jus key bored, fast punches will go in through the sound
Show don't shift defensively, then I'll proceed to lowercase into the ground
ok
Ya obviously didn't plan that punch, cuz it was battered at worst
cuz how the hell did I see my reflection...when yours shattered it first!
ha, nice comeback

v/ Lay....i thought show's was kinda bleh...no offense, lay came harder