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very good, as a military memeber my self alot of it is true if you think about it... they way u said it is a very interesting way to look at it... and your right, this piece was very good, had a good imagery... and i like the wording you put into it as well... nice vocab here and there... first few lines reeled me in to it... good job fam. keep postin.
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