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08-17-04, 12:30 AM | #1 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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my wonderful poem for the day ,yes i said wonderful
IP:
my negativity leads to my creativity ,
"the hate" i feed off of it i guess it led to the insensitvity i rose from these ashes picked my fights , and at times bit my lip but the progress i made , never let me commit i never trusted no one , made sure to keep my shit straight a few white lies to cover up anything they could hold against me i know they wait and ancipate , participate in there little games- i dont think so but surprised by own ingenuity , the acuity that befell me was simply amazing , i know what they said raising a kid like me cant be easy so i made it as hard as it could be *dont get me wrong the trips to hawaii, newyork ,london,paris,caen(northern france for all u dat dont know) all in the span of 6 months is amazing,the trips to the "other house" , the summer house will be forever in me but its time i made something of my self instead of being supported by my family best wishes to the 05 gang "EVERYTHING IS EVERYTHING ,BUT WE ARE SOMETHING YOU DONT SEE EVERY DAY" |
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08-17-04, 02:40 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
damn kidd another good drop...liked dat one...only thing that was off was da structure...otha than that tho it was a nice poem...feelin those first 5 lines...keep it comin peace
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