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01-21-04, 04:13 PM
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Mona Lisa.
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'Volve-Throw Some Out--Mad Flow
IP: 9E53 07A2
I was looking through SS wen i saw this..It felt keyed to me but the rawness of it created such a fucking Ill flow, and the description was Emaculate.
I'm not one to Nominate shit but I loved it. As Time Slips & Each Line Fits My Mind Grips The Image Of Your Devine Lips Your Smile's Lit & Bright So When I Look For It At Night.. I Find It Its Right.. Where I Left It.. Behind My Sight Eyes Close Tight .. But Stay Wide Open To You Been Gone With No Return.. Im Still Hoping You Do Ive Roped In A Few.. Boo's & Ho's They Were Nothing So I Didnt Mind Losing Those Its Like I've Been Moving Slow.. Every Since Your Yes's Began Moving To No's Still Think About Removing Your Clothes... Smoothing Your Skin With Its Soothing Tones.. Wish You Didn't Choose To Go.. But You Did & The Choice Was Yours.. I Still Smell Your Sent.. Its Stays Moist In My Pours.. & My Voice Is Sore.. Your Name Stays Repeated.. I Wasn't Blind To Your Needs.. Just To Lame To See Them.. Im Trapped In Shame .. But I Cant Blame Your Freedom Cause Im Locked Into My Self With A Cage Of Deamons I Know You Think Thats Strange For A Reason.. Its Not... Inside Me Is Where Your Danger Was Breathing.. You Are Sane For Leaving.. I Came Into It Decieving.. Simply Maimed The Truth Good Intentions Turned Bad & Aimed At You.. You Had Love In Sight.. But The Game Was My View.. Cause Other Relationships.. Yea, I Arranged A Few Engaged To You & You Knew.. So I Stayed Accused Some Rages Flew.. Fists Were Raised & Let Down With Force Now.. Im Pissed At Those Days & Have Since Found The Source.. Been Around The Courts.. Divorce, Domestic Violence..& Charges Of All Sorts But... Look At The Cost? I Lost The Only Thing That Mattered All Because I Had To Be The Boss.. Leaving You Beaten & Battered I Think I've Defeated The Pattern.. Stoped Cheating & Being A Bastard Forgiveness Is The Only Thing Im Asking.. Leave The Bad Memories In The Trash.. Along With The Doubts Cause Lord Knows I Definately Had To Throw Some Out...
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01-21-04, 04:41 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
That was a very deep poem. I really enjoyed that piece. I'd say in.
The flow was great. and the picture of emotion was really capturing. I really enjoyed that. Great Job.
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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01-21-04, 04:57 PM
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IP: 41E9 3905
damn... i always get bored reading peoples pieces but not this time...
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01-21-04, 07:36 PM
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Over Weight
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IP: 399E F0FD
Yeah..I did feel that piece..and I would have to say In..
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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01-21-04, 08:04 PM
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Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
This piece would sound dope Audio
so Evolve plz put it to a beat
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01-22-04, 11:21 AM
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OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
I would put it to a beat if i had audio capabilities.. I have no computer at home so i only use the one at work... Anyway, thanks for the nomination.
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01-22-04, 11:37 AM
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Fuck You, I'm Iller
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IP: 843C 2CD1
Declined!
Just fucking with ya 'Volve..... I'll read it after work
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01-22-04, 11:49 AM
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OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
LOL.. You Bastard ^^^
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01-27-04, 09:33 AM
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OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
So i guess the answer is no?
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01-27-04, 12:07 PM
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Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
Fuck no....every1 has said yes upto now
RB legend Mods plz peep this Maven, Chrit, any1??
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01-27-04, 12:11 PM
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IP: 544E ED5D
word, up... mods... appear!
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01-27-04, 12:42 PM
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IP: A9A7 727D
My apologies, it's exam time, so I've been studying and the like =)
Mega dopeness Volve =) In.
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01-28-04, 08:38 AM
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OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
Yo .. How the fuck is the dis to Divinity in already.. but this drop aint in?
Im not saying it is the best drop ever... but it is definately better than some that are in there... especially the Divinity Diss |
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01-28-04, 10:31 AM
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AKA Cereal Shelf
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IP: 6E65 1B29
This was dope, I love reading Evolve's open mics, he's dope at it. This was legendary, the flow was dope, so were the multis, everything and it kept me reading, which is hard to do.
Vote - In.
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01-28-04, 01:10 PM
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IP: A9A7 727D
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okay, know fucking what? every fucking time I turn around I hear someone say "why did you put that in!" well shit! I'm putting yours in! I already voted it in! so did everyone else! I was just waiting on another legends mod! So stop making me type all these damn exclaimation points!!!!!!!!!
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