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H.D. 5 83.33%
twenty9 1 16.67%
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Old 02-03-06, 05:47 PM   #1
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From: Bridgewater
H.D. vs twenty9

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Old 02-04-06, 06:19 PM   #2
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Old 02-05-06, 02:19 AM   #3
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h.d sayin i spit garbage, he must b high or not no the definition,
im gonna win, this is the truth, not a mutha fuckin premonition/

ya got ya fictional rappa called contam-ination
you’se a bitch, its known throughout the nation/

don’t battle me bitch, u’ll be leavein in a hearse,
u only won a battle, cuz flow couldn’t drop a verse/
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Old 02-05-06, 10:37 PM   #4
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Old 02-05-06, 11:19 PM   #5
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come on h.d plz stop procrastinatin and drop a verse so i can get this battle over with
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Old 02-06-06, 10:26 PM   #6
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29 times the amount of character used in every on of ya rhymes is the odds of you winning
You’d do better surviving a dinner date with Hanibal Lector, tied down on a stretcher
Locked in the kitchen, you could up chuck ya deserts, than me? You’ll never spit sicker
Ya style causes laughter, I’ll shatter ya bladder through ya hip bone and leave ya ass pissed
Your punches wouldn’t have impact if had two brass fists, with meteors crammed in em
You could claim to be divine 29 times, I’ll watch 29 signs of God damning em
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Old 02-06-06, 10:52 PM   #7
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From: Bridgewatta
This was feedback posted for H.D.

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i cant believe i ever would say this to a battle but this was my far the shitty battle i have ever and i mean ever seen in my life fuck h.d. none or maybe one line of urs rymes and the suck really bad worst i have seen of urs
29 well u had wat u usually have garbage bullshit lol
and we r used to that and stop wit the one second rymes ross
that means the ryme is over before you even heard it
fuck i am not surprizd the battle was the shits worst battle ever
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Old 02-06-06, 11:06 PM   #8
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fuck you jordan you little bitch admit it every battle you participate every voter says your verse is whack so you cant tell me shit about my verse until you can get ppl 2 stop doin that so fuck u and ur bitch ass feed-back
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Old 02-06-06, 11:20 PM   #9
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i have to give this to twenty.....yo h.d. you have to be lying about your awards or that's the wackes sites ever since your shit definately doesn't deserve any awards at all. twenty, you came real weak. but at least your shit rhymed and had a punch in there...both need to elevate

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Old 02-06-06, 11:33 PM   #10
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Voted For: H.D.

Vote - HD

better shit twenty9, you improvin' a bit, your shit is better, your last bar was not bad, but...you got some more work to do...HD got ya.

Flow- different catz, different stylez, each one had their own...no noticeable structure problems from either cat...didn't prefer one flow over the other...At first I thought HD stretched his bars, but his flow works, it's just fast.

Punches- HD threw some creative punches...this site tends to favor the whole "rip your skull out and fuck your mom" type punches, but HD did it in an ill way. Twenty9, you had some better heat, but still a far cry from devasting. Your last bar is a personal/punch...think about what you did in that bar, cuz it's on the right track. So HD takes Punches.

Personals- HD's drop is loaded with personals...almost overkill, but pretty good. Twenty9, think about what personals you could form off of HD, your last bar, again, is on the right track. HD took Personals.

Multis- not a stellar display from twenty9, but he had some rhymes that were multis, and some that were close, but HD took Multis with some good inner multis, and multis.

Wordplay- None.

HD took this one...a better showing from twenty9, but he still needs to work to elevate. RTF in my battle with Tech Skillz if yall haven't yet.
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Old 02-06-06, 11:36 PM   #11
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From: Bridgewatta
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what h.d. didnt tell u

Awards:

1 - 3 Class H.O.F. @ UF - he was the only one in his class
1st class H.O.F. @ THH - he was only rapper on that part of site
Best crew @ THH - he was in a crew that had all good rappers except him
Best crew @ Okayplayer - he was in a crew that had all good rappers except him
Best crew Battle @ Okayplayer 2 times he wasnt even in the battle he just sayed hi in it
Best crew battle @ UF 3 times he was in a crew that battled their selfs (they almost lost)
Best crew battle @ THH he never rapped in the battle just sayed hello
Top 10 Punchlines of the week @ THH only five rappers on site
Top 20 emcees @ UF only 20 rappers on site (he almost never made list)

there is the truth i did some hard work and found the truth everone should know
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Old 02-06-06, 11:41 PM   #12
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JC real, you just a bitch, HD's concepts far surpass your weak-minded-top-40-bullshit-imitation-8-mile-watchin' faggit style.

It ain't his fault you ain't lyrically inclined enough to HD's rhyme scheme or punches. Fuck your Bridgewater bullshit, all the Bridgewater peepz hate you, I seen the pictures.

Weird, I usually see eye to eye with Tech...everyone got they opinions, I guess.

Sorry for the freepost, nice battle.
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Old 02-07-06, 12:44 AM   #13
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fuck u and anyways back too battle boys vote on tha battle
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Old 02-07-06, 03:08 AM   #14
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tech Skillz
Voted For: twenty9

i have to give this to twenty.....yo h.d. you have to be lying about your awards or that's the wackes sites ever since your shit definately doesn't deserve any awards at all. twenty, you came real weak. but at least your shit rhymed and had a punch in there...both need to elevate


due go re-read my verse shit rhymes althrough-out... all of my verses rhyme all through out I really don't understand how you didn't see that... Rhyming with just the last word in everyline is soo played out... now go re-read my verse and say it out loud... and notice the difference.
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Old 02-07-06, 03:12 AM   #15
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JC just go set up a battle... this time I'll explain my verse and point out every single fucking rhyme for the morons here... and Lmao@ your lil bullshit explanations for my awards... You guys are elementary... so I'll just have to school you now...
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