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Old 02-24-05, 10:19 PM   #31
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Uppin for the last time..
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Old 02-27-05, 08:20 PM   #32
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I just listened to act like you kno. I don't hear the tupac style, maybe with his early sh*t your beat has that feel. You hit the beat real good sometimes, but sometimes it kind of sounds like your talking. But overall it is decent. Better then half the shit on here, check my shit out too, i take criticism good, plus I got those hot beats
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Old 02-28-05, 07:11 AM   #33
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Word @ the Amercianize you thing. You have pretty clear speech, but I could picture this smoother without the accent, but it's cool. Can I have this beat? Keep doin big things, good to see someone else is doin a mixtape, mines not free tho :-P but yeah, g'luck with everything
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Old 02-28-05, 08:37 AM   #34
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Thanks man..
I'm getting a new microphone and pre-amp sometime soon.. So I'll be re-recording a lot for my groups free mixtape.. Its all a learning process at the moment though..
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Old 03-02-05, 09:42 AM   #35
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The mixing needs to be fixed up..the vocals is a tad loud....the delivery is bad..your jus shouting...an ya lyrics are no where near as intense as ya delivery...you should calm down a make ya flow more melodicbut still hype.....throw some multies in ya flow..it was good but coulda been better...the lyrics was cool....overall track coulda been better 7/10
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Old 03-06-05, 10:55 PM   #36
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good shit bro. the beat is dope. i just can't wait to get back into this shit now that im back home. not a bad song anyway.
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