http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/intermental.htm
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Its called "My dedication"

Im using a cheap mic so hence a lil fuzzyness...very lil...it was a one take only thing...and my first audio song ever...please....check it out.......this means alot to me:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/intermental.htm

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Thats the link again and below are the lyrics:

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U can see them comin down our eyes, so let this song cry
U can see them comin down my eyes, so let this song cry


Bombs went off, alarms sounded, a bus blew up and trains were grounded,
A deathenin site as the unexpecting dead body increased and mounted,
Worry for our parents as they went into work usin the tube or the buses,
I remember at school bein told the bad news and wonderin what the fuss is,
Called my mama up hopin she was alrite, and she was still livin n alive,
I was thankfull to hear it but sad to feel it when other parents died,
They jus sank to the floor, pleading for the grace of God and asking why?
All I could do was to lend a helping arm to lean on, as their eyes cried,

Chorus
U can see them comin down our eyes, so let this song cry
U can see them comin down my eyes, so let this song cry

What was this over? war in Iraq or was it really to do with the oil and the notes
Al-Quaeida tryin to get their point accross but not to cause deaths to provoke,
Blair, take our troops out of Iraq, we wanna live in peace and harmony,
If you dont, they will attack other nations like France or Germany,
Do not test this terrorists, bombs are their degree and guns their infatuation,
I was saddened to hear this, so thats why I made this, so RIP, this my dedication

Chorus

U can see them comin down our eyes, so let this song cry
U can see them comin down my eyes, so let this song cry

Links to follow

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197706

one more to follow after this

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196892

there we go

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upppin cmon people

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cmon people and yall sleepin its for people who died?...whats wrong with yall

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I'll give feed, your mic is shitty for sure...this would have been way more better with a nice mic because the quality was very bad. Hit someone up to mix this for you, maybe they can make it a bit better you know

I'm diggin the beat you used, and the lyrics were very deep. I must say I feel you on everything because I went through hell thinking my friend was hurt or in worst case killed. She got lucky she just stepped into the subway station when it exploded so she just had some scratches on surface of her skin. As I said lyrics were deep and emotional, flow was aight, hook might have been bit longer but it was nice.

Intro and outro just made ppl that listen see how much this means to you and to everyone with a bit of humanity out there. Don't sleep on this, real talk right here...

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Thanks ma that means alot to me, I really wanted to show my emotions...my man James's parents were killed...yo man it jus shows how lucky I am...I am gettin a new mic...but I will have to wait for that baby...but this was a one take thing and dedicated to Shirley Deeby and Jackson Deeby

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RIP to them and all the ones that died there, they'll live on in our hearts and souls

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Yeah thanks alot ma for hollerin at me...really appreciate it...~1~

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uppppppppppp........

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uppppppppin..............

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Chad said that



That was by DIPLOMAT



That was by flomore

They have given feed somewhere else... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2279367

thats that link...jus posted so You would have a better overview of the track

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decent track kid............ cant knock the quality you do what you can .......... overall nice drop.......

drop feed on True dope.....

"ez"

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aiight I'm peepin' this man.

likin' this beat. lmao @ how shitty your mic is. lol j/p but yea, good that you gettin' new one. lol but anyways, like I said, beat is nice. the lyrics are real nice. Flow is off in places, but you'll get better. But for like your second drop ever, man, this is real nice. Really did a good job on this. Emotion could be upped, but that will come wit time as well. but real nice drop. Good to see people showin' respect to events like that. stay up man. pc one.

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