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Old 03-29-04, 10:19 PM   #1
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From: Da Castle
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A soldier ready for war, grenades all pinned out/
You'll get the guage to spray if you make it pissed now/
Place you face-to-face so, you can taste the shit now/
Lay you face-down and tie you up from ankles to wrists down/
Ain't no sucker-punchin' me, I stay with my fists out/
This place is filled with pussies, so I'll make these fish drown/
Your depicted a clown, so the shit these MC's are spittin' now/
is shit that could have them seriously injured, teeth and chin down/
In the ground, But I know all this bull-shit, beef, bickers, and bouts/
all lead up to teach us, but we suck cause we havent figured the shit out/
So it's about time you actors get Edwards Scissors to cut the act-in-half/
Have his hands attack a man, my bad if that were to damage ya plans/
but only the strong survive, none of the faggots last/
Everything you want you gotta' grasp and grab it fast/
'cause no one knows when that man's gunna' snatch it back/
But if it resorts to me havin' to grab a gat 'cause fag's mad I rap/
I will gladly stand, give it all away and hand it back/
Ha, I have to laugh, Cause why would I work my ass off/
to give up, get hurt fast and fall, how could I manage that?/
All the bull-shit you wanna' continue wit', that plan is scrapped/
I'll expand fast and have van's packed with man's strapped/
ready to blast at anyone, whoever can't adapt/
Most times, I don't even have to battle cats/
Cause I ask myself where's the damn challenge at?/
My habits have made me spit crazy and advantage passed/
wack-rappers cause they can't stand how I'm rappin' and/
not spittin' average raps. A savage man, you'll get chewed up/
This dude's stuff is screwed up enough/
that it will have you ruined and junk/
You useless and stupid and fuck; So go and spit that fuckin' fluid up/
I'm the Undisputed punk/
I'm on my own nuts on this one, Turn that mutha'fuckin music up/

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