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07-01-05, 02:49 AM | #1 | ||||
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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New love poem.
IP: 4B08 80B4
ur eyes of truth lips of romance fell in love wit u wit no Second Glance Im still lovin u no matter wat ur Finance thinkin of us 2 being together wit ur head layin on my chest beauty smell of Zest wit u round im neva stressed u hellped me when i was on the bench depressed now again u helped me when it was needed from all the tears I bleeded ur the reson y i succeded
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07-01-05, 10:34 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 2DCE 2E36
Thats real dope. alot of feeling. good job on emotion but needs work. ... keep em coming mayn..
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07-01-05, 01:14 PM | #3 | ||||
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP: 5FB6 C818
Ight coo thx Legend.
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07-01-05, 03:05 PM | #4 | ||||
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP: 5FB6 C818
cmon ppl im uppin for sum feedback.
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07-18-05, 10:33 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 453C CBF2
shea. I'ma up this for you. and leave some feed when I drop. forgot to say.
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07-18-05, 12:50 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 7156 2710
Okay piece... actually very nice and brutal in its own way...
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