Wordox. This was pretty good, but some of it didn't rhyme. Teenage pregnancy is no laughing matter, and neither is abortion or shit... can't really say the topic is original, but it's a sad one nevertheless. You going to show your girl these pieces? Keep on dropping them, let out some emotions, don't go all sadist because I like impaling sadists.

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very emotional....rhyme scheme was kinda off but emotion held up for it umm vocab u needa up that......and just keep lettin out ur emotions.......ur doin good.....hey rtf on my o/m please its in my sig

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thats was nice, but yo the situation was bad but ya flow as good

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u ruined ur chicks life if u really gave her that shit......yung ass kids thinkin that shits a game wear a condom out of respect for your girl....u dont love her...thats selfish shit.....if u truly loved her you woulda never did that shit....as for your story u need to elevate a lot....
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