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Old 04-25-03, 11:23 AM   #1
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Arrow ::::*~Brainz Blown~*::::

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:::Ears ringing, rumors lingering, saying
BaKCardii's a bastard, born to faces
switched with satan, seeing things cause
I'm plastered~~~
mixed with-in, the blood with-sin, adrenaline
seepin through skin, my brains blown
to the fact that the devils me friend~~~
catastrophies on my thoughts when they rain
in my head, and you think you see tears?, nah
that's the rage that I shed~~~
I cant absorb to the fact I'm chewed and swallowed
by fright, my visions blurred to the signs
voices louder at night~~~

:::An Elm street inside my mind
but no freddy's not here, a
temporary storage organ for
my feelings an fears~~~
things propelled from my lips
would leave you silent like lambs
giving me another reason to get a
mental exam~~~
dont get it wrong I'm not crazy i just look at shyt different
fuck the world and what it's worth cause mine is torn and demented~~~
seen stampeding in the darkness, trying to get out quick
before my mind freezes time and invites me on trips~~~
but no one can hear me scream not even the 13th ghost
saying I'm a lost cause and uh, welcome to the colt~~~


:::But see my souls gone and
my brain is distorted must have
been that shot of guilt and that
anger I snorted~~~
cant understand that when i think
my thoughts is nearly contagious
and when I speak many people
cackle Jesus just save her~~~
used to wish of slit-wrists and mis-fits
in dark spaces, now I wish of pure's kiss
in dim lights with mime faces~~~
but like it says it's just a wish and me, I'm
gutter grown, but when I wake up from
the daze, dont matter my brainz blown~~~
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Old 04-25-03, 11:24 AM   #2
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Old 04-28-03, 09:38 AM   #3
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sleep huh?......^^^^^^
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Old 05-01-03, 02:38 AM   #4
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deffintly feelin this. ya flow was well writ neva lettin up either. ya horror movie metaphors put in sum great imagery. i liked how this peice just grew deeper like it was evolvin. sucks foe the sleepin, but i think ya scared them away with the lenght, but a dope peice no doubt.

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Old 05-01-03, 11:06 AM   #5
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thnx..upppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-01-03, 12:05 PM   #6
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excellent flow and wordplay
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