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Old 05-26-04, 03:55 PM   #1
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<<"Pleasure & Pain"... A poem for da Ladies...>>

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“Pleasure And Pain”

Can I call you Baby?
See, I don’t really care what your name is.
Could give a fuck what your momma calls you.
I wanna call you Baby.
I wanna make your life painless
and make your future promising.
I wanna make you climax in stages
of emotional bliss
until your heart beats skip
and your sex drive throws fits.
I know what you’re thinkin’:
Who in the hell is this
nigga talkin’ all this shit?
Well, you can call me “Pleasure And Pain.”
But, right now I’m just the verse on this page
tryin’ to get deep inside the depths of your mind.
Is that okay?
Coz if it’s all right with you I’d like to take you
on a cruise around the universe of infatuation.
Escape the dimensions of your problems
and prepare yourself for sentimental emancipation.
Baby… I can call you Baby, right?
I could give a fuck what your daddy calls you.
I wanna call you Baby.
I wanna put this “Pleasure And Pain” all up in you
until you scream my name.
Let us spin on the axis of desirable stimulation
with nothing but an aura of attraction
to show our affiliation.
Your presence deserves not a single distraction.
The floor is yours by divine right.
If men were lost
you would be their guiding light.
Now, you can call me whatever you like,
but I’m known as “Pleasure And Pain.”
But, for now I’m just the verse on this page
soaking into the depths of your mind…
Is that okay…?
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Old 05-26-04, 04:01 PM   #2
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Yes That Is Okay.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Most Deff, lol
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Old 05-28-04, 05:06 AM   #3
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^^lOl... I'll hold you to dat!

Uppin this shit...
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Old 06-03-04, 06:16 AM   #4
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Damn, is anyone else gonna read this?
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Old 06-03-04, 04:04 PM   #5
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I Own Think So lol
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Old 06-03-04, 06:15 PM   #6
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thats a hot spit. you got the ladies feelin all hot and bothered.
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Old 06-09-04, 06:34 AM   #7
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Up...
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Old 06-09-04, 03:19 PM   #8
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haha mack daddy man i think the girls r gonna get to wet to even read this just from the title
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Old 06-09-04, 03:25 PM   #9
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MayNe Don't Even Trip .. lol.. I Aint Wet .. 'Exactly Yet' ..
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Old 06-09-04, 04:08 PM   #10
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dis was ko..nutin speacial...but nice in places..work on mulits and deeper poetic techs...
nice drop
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Old 06-10-04, 11:16 AM   #11
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^^Multis??? This aint no fuckkin Rap verse it's a Poem nigga... Poems aint even gotta rhyme... Fuckk outta here wid dat shit...

And at DangerousMind... Shit... Poetry aint da only thang I'm good at gurl!
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Old 06-10-04, 06:01 PM   #12
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Well..... 'Details' .. Work... Please Do Tell....!!!!!!
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Old 06-17-04, 09:30 PM   #13
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Your poem was tight. I don't really think that certain gurls will like to chill wit you though. It sounds like all you want is to f*ck em, or was that your intention of writing it? Hah, Nice work though
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