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02-18-05, 05:33 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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Rage
IP: 0D2F 5926
Rage What is this I am feeling, its weird It's one of those things I have always feared I ask her out and she says maybe Does she like me, or is she playing with me I ask her does she like me and again she says maybe I am feeling something, It's not love,confusion or anything like that Your favorite thing in the world, It's like living forever without that It fells like my heart is locked away for eternity in a cage Alone in the darkness, and the only emotion I can feel is rage Dedicated to Tiffany Nicole Lucas |
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02-18-05, 05:40 PM
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#2
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IP: 0D2F 5926
upping for positive feedback.
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02-18-05, 06:11 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
good drop i'm feeling this 1 in particular cuz i've been there plenty of times myself i c potential in each & eva poem u write continue 2 represent 4 "Grand Hustlaz"
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02-18-05, 06:13 PM
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IP: D585 C0EE
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02-18-05, 07:27 PM
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IP: D585 C0EE
uppin.....................
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02-18-05, 07:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8A1A D0A3
not bad. keep it up dawg
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02-18-05, 07:43 PM
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IP: B821 E395
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02-18-05, 08:22 PM
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IP: CD8C A356
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02-18-05, 08:31 PM
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#9
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IP: CD8C A356
uppin for positive feedback on this.
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02-18-05, 10:40 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Good drop but wit no emotion it shud of been longer just to show your emotion in da poem good structure doei like da verse doe i thoght it waz sweet good drop keep droppin
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02-19-05, 02:55 PM
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IP: 6618 2DB7
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02-23-05, 11:06 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 596C 2677
This is better than the other one. Good drop on the verse.
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03-19-05, 03:54 PM
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IP: AB07 3993
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