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Old 05-29-03, 12:00 PM   #1
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::::*~The Climax~*:::: (sexual)

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::::*~The Climax~*::::


Intertwining with my fingers, is those
strong of another, slowly dripping are my juices
like morning, melted butter///....
passionately our lips meet and decending
is your tounge, aroused by goosebumps
on my breast, which makes your mind numb///....
candles lit for the light scent of emotions foreplay in
the air, caressing spots no one has found making my
loines flare///....

Silky secretions on my skin, with hot oils mixed with
lust, slowly demanding for my misses, but'll you'll
have to catch us///....
thrusting my legs apart, I begin to look in your eyes
streaming are my rivers, briefly stopping, for soft tides///....
you clutch my hand and say breathe, for the pleasure may, also be pain, I'm ready without words letting you know my body must be tamed///...
I close my eyes and picture the the scene everything's clear it so it looks, now I feel you inside of me, moaning softness with each push///.... you tell me to open my eyes, so I see that the love has appeared I do as you ask with slight nervousness, your face warm with what is sincere///....

Placing my legs upon your shoulders tightly holding my sweat glistened thighs, I feel you deeper inside of me, and my breaths I cant subside///....
gripping your back, fingers tearing into your skin, while you penetrate just slighty more, windows blown open with ocean
kissed breezes which our bodies try not to ignore///....
laying me back down I grip satin sheets, get hotter with each breath I take, you sense that it's near my climax is coming and nows time for zero mistakes///....
grabbing my breast you taunt me lusciously, two fingers inside
my crevice, you pull them out, smile at me sweetly, cause now you know what's wettest ///....

Thrusting in me, you begin to accelerate, my calves and arms shiver
playing with me like a stringed puppatear, all because I'm limber///....
biting my bottom lip is the signal you recieve when my body can't take much more, after this I'll feel a numbness, body happy with a tad bit sore///.... now you're faster and I tell you I'm cumming, my juices have overflowed, you gleam and grin at me knowingly as my eyes begin to roll///.... my chest caves in and I breathe deeply to make my heart stop racing, you pull me up to your body with ease,
I'm forever in your oasis///....
now in reality few moments to later emotions are far from flat,
high strung, with love lust and sex the repercusssions to a climax///....
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Old 05-29-03, 12:03 PM   #2
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Uh, no in perticular reason for writing this poem cough::horny::cough
well reply if ya like holler
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Old 05-29-03, 12:29 PM   #3
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it must be good i have an errrection lol...just kidding but it was really well described but not dirty-this made me laugh

grabbing my breast you taunt me lusciously, two fingers inside
my crevice, you pull them out, smile at me sweetly, cause now you know what's wettest ///

and i liked this

you tell me to open my eyes, so I see that the love has appeared I do as you ask with slight nervousness, your face warm with what is sincere///....

so anyone who is a virgin read this...next best thing...lol

nice stuff
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Old 05-29-03, 01:18 PM   #4
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lol @ kass..

Yeah, I liked this. Good description! Now I'm thinking about having sex..err, maybe I should have kept that to myself. I'm glad I read this, kinda made me laugh. You wrote it good. I was looking for a part to put in here as my favorite but if I quoted one I'd have to quote it all. The whole thing was good. Keep posting.
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Old 05-29-03, 01:36 PM   #5
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i think its safe to say if u dont have a gurl dont read this shyt unless u dont mind jackin off!!! naw but for real that shyt was nice i liked it all...
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Old 05-29-03, 02:58 PM   #6
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Damn Gyrl, TIGHT SHIT!! ITs been tooo long since you've graced RB with your talent..

This piece was steaming hottt.

"thrusting my legs apart, I begin to look in your eyes
streaming are my rivers, briefly stopping, for soft tides///...."

I liked how you never missed a beat when describing the eroticism, yet you still managed to keep it classy and beautiful, by adding the metaphors.

Vivid imagery, nice steady flow, I was really feelin it. Overall hott piece. Stay up with that shit.

Thanks for peepin my shit, gyrl, appreciate it. Hope to see more from you.
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Old 05-29-03, 02:58 PM   #7
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Ha..I liked how you put (Sexual) after the title...Cuz you know a lot more people will read it that way....heh.
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Old 05-29-03, 06:16 PM   #8
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shit was ill, are you the same bakardi that was on the site a couple of years ago when tha server crashed around december,well if so you still got that talent,thats shit mos def. hot,keep spittin those ill ass pieces be lookin foward to em'.
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