I don't usually upload my instrumentals on the internet, but I really need advice for this one. Just tell me what you think it needs please. There are no samples so I can change every thing in the beat and add pretty much anything to it.

advice??

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i think you should leave the rain and thunder in for the first 2 verses,thean fade it out and change the rhythem of the piano at the end like in the begining of the song you was fealing suisidal
thean on the third verse shit got better for you so theres no more rain make it sound happier at the end...but this beat needs an orchastraited background,violins,trumpets,horns,harps,etc..
that'll be your base for the beat and towards the end like i said just have the piano change up and leave it by its self with nothing else for the end...but its early were im at and i just got up not to long ago so my mind ain't working that great yet,,but thats my opinion....im also known as micrippa...i make beatz myself..like india sorrow,headknock shit,but try that homie..peace

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this is a good beat....that 808 bass that jumps in and out... you might want to increase the attack on that....cuz its too sharp on the front...

keep the rain, it gives it a deeper feeling, if thats what ur looking for, add the thunder in a lil bit , but not as much as in the beginging.... i think some kind of bell noise always make it sound deeper or like a slower, like the bells in eminem the way i am

sup homie, my bad for sleepin on you


i actually listened to this when u first posted it, but was too busy at the time to reply. It just slipped my mind to come back.


But anyways this is dope. I'm lovin the piano and that slowed down kick that keeps comin in periodically. good shit. feelin the snare. im usaully a sample person, but im feelin this. dont seem like too much needs to be changed on it. maybe just a lil minor mixing to make the beat seem more like one piece of music. During the end it gets a lil repetitive. Maybe a few switch ups would help. I dont know what bell he was talkin about. I dont hear one. You play this yourself? What equipment do you use? Good shit homie. You should join the beat league. I didnt know you even made beats. Did you make that beat on The Whole Truth's "Simplicity"?

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yea i didnt do any switch ups or anything yet. I really just put the beat together like this so people could critique the basic idea of the beat. ill switch it up and shit. I just didnt know what peeps might like to hear in this one cus its still pretty empty and i drew a blank. i think he was tellin me to add a couple bell hits in there. it might work. I dont use any samples. Iplay it all myself in real time with a midi keyboard. I use soundfonts for the instruments. Theres some real tight soundfonts out there for every instrument u can think of. u gotta pay for the best ones but its worth it for the quality.

and i dont usually post my beats on the net. That simplicity beat is mine. He gave me props on it at the end of the track. that track was for the mixtape i just dropped. *cough* click the sig *cough* lol

thanks for the feedback

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that simplicity beat is raw. i thought splivit jams was ya label, i didnt know it was your name.

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