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.:FreemaN:. 5 100.00%
TheProphet777 0 0%
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Old 01-20-04, 07:39 PM   #16
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word i onno both were ok....freeman had the more thoughtful verse but he lacked as far as dope as shit goes like...if you were tryin to be like confusious or some shit..it just wasn't quite there.....Prophets was intersestin...jesus the G ..its a thought..it was entertaining....your structure was fucked though and made it harder to read so i'm gonna go with freeman on this topical battle interesting viewpoints by both mC's no hate plz hit this up thanx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107950
 
Old 01-20-04, 07:40 PM   #17
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iight... well its 1-0 to me on poll... well, it is when the vote is changed to my side...

we need some real votes from people who know how to vote on a topical...

uppin #2
 
Old 01-20-04, 07:42 PM   #18
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2-0 on poll now... once Killer Emcee's vote is fixed...

keep em comin in...

thanks for everyone that has gave feedback... its alll good...

uppin #3
 
Old 01-20-04, 08:07 PM   #19
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Good Topical battle

Freeman--you had a great outline of this topic, you described perspectives well and had good vocab and wordplay made me really think...i wrote some what something similer but didn't hit it like that. Good verse i really enjoyed that.

P- Different aproach humerous but i felt it wasnt realilistic,jezus smoken a blunt? kinda odd lol, but unique seemed to have some emotion but nothing to major over all good verse.

But i liked freemans better as it attracted the reader to a more valuable read.
 
Old 01-20-04, 08:07 PM   #20
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^dont sway votes freeman....that shit should be taken off..dont sway shit....and under always judges my shit the same way about structure..i dont know why but if you can read RIGHT UNDER u would know what the hell it is....he always votes against me on the same thing even when its smaller...im wonderng now...uppin 3rd time...People plz take your time to read this shit and dont d/r....
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Old 01-20-04, 08:12 PM   #21
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are you talking about me?

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Old 01-20-04, 08:14 PM   #22
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no.............freeman is swaying votes...he did it two times...u dont sway in a battle of any type...for gods sake why the hell u goign to judge my shit like that anyhow rule...nobody has ever read a sense of humor on topical..everyone is always seiours..i wanted to change that...but it proves only some read verses
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Old 01-20-04, 08:16 PM   #23
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how is counting the votes swaying... its now 3-0 to me... thats not swaying...

jus admit that ive beat you... jus chill out man...
 
Old 01-20-04, 08:19 PM   #24
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u aint beat me man..u cant get someones vote changed when they dont know wtf there doing....u swayed there mind..ur swaying votes also....THis is called swaying...U should know what swaying is....3-0 is messing wit peoples mind.....u should know that...so when peole read that...they be like..oh hes winning ill just vote him to get this shit closed...
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Old 01-20-04, 08:21 PM   #25
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ok... a apologise... im very sorry... ive seen other people {Vets} count the polls...

didnt think that was classed as swaying... a thought that was... 'his verse was wack, vote for mine'...

lets jus stop this and let the votes come in...

I fixed the polls... and this was your last UP... Prophet... you have on more UP.
-Axe

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Old 01-21-04, 03:56 PM   #26
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Free takes this... a feel that his verse had much better wordplay, and a better vocab.
It painted the picture in my head... had a interesting viewpoint aswell... 777, your verse was ok, but just didnt set it in my mind as well as Free's...

vote - Freeman...
 
Old 01-21-04, 05:04 PM   #27
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nice battle you 2 .....................................cnt vote cus of crew.......but nice...........................................pz
 
Old 01-21-04, 05:32 PM   #28
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iight breakdown 4 ya'll,.,., both verse's were dope iwas feelin dem both but freemans was more inventive and got say more enjoyable!
vote:!freeman..
 
Old 01-21-04, 05:34 PM   #29
dizzy hommel
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Soz peeps 4got ma link:- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106594
dere we go.be fair n break it down like me!
 
Old 01-22-04, 01:53 PM   #30
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ayt freeman took this cause his stuff went better, his flow was good and structure easy 2 read and i was feelin freemans more!!

prophet's aint bad, it was funny but was harder 2 read and wasnt really feelin it

overall- freeman
 
 


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