Music Is Life

Seems like everybodys life is overflowing with drama..
Family splitting into two are now becommin' more common..
Causing stress on the youth and it's beginning to show..
A growing movement of drug users and suicide notes..
But it's hard to grasp reality when everything's wrong..
When your worlds crashing around you, it's hard to stay strong..
That's when I turn to a song and use the music to guide me..
Cause with a pen and a page I unleash the fury inside me..
I don't need a bottle of liquor or drugs to raise my high..
That shit is just bitter, I'd rather draw wings to fly..
And write rhymes that have reason, leavin' other kids with hope..
Turn their minds away from suicides, and teach them how to cope..
I mean my life can't get any better, I got all that I need..
With just stack of paper, a pencil, and the mind to succeed..
Filling notebooks with thoughts, speaking through every line..
Because music is life.... at least I've made it mine..

Soul Rebel

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Enjoy it and shit..

That was actually really good


I liked it, sorry for the bad feed. I'm eating a pot pie. But good job.

good concept....could have been more to say, but fluid. for sho.
good flow. hot topic, let me get down wit you on your next piece.

^ Word, I'll get at you for sure..

This was basically just keyed. I needed to write up a quick 8 bars for a track I'm throwing down with Px and Daubs..

I just figured I'd post it to get some feedback..

holy, life story

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I like it alot , very nice creative story had good feeling and emotions behind it , your structure was on point too ...so was your wordplay and vocab usuage really created a very vivid picture in the readers mind .. overall really not much to say about this peice very nice drop...keep it up.

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good flow
felt the emotion throughout whole song
i wuz likin da rhyming...good shit
not much more to say but keep spittin

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Thank-you for the feed everyone.

oh shit, it's soul rebel, woot woot

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Damn, i like this A LOT...Its really creative and everything was there...Structure was off just a lil but flow was right there man...I loved this piece...Keeep it up man your dope...I would give it a.....HMMMMMMMMMMM......9.5/10 in my opinion and i dont think anyone would really totally disagree with me...word..1

^ Thanks..

I still have a lot to learn though..

Bumpin' this for some more feedback..

i like the shit man most deffiantley a good verse from you....

Seems like everybodys life is overflowing with drama..
Family splitting into two are now becommin' more common..
Causing stress on the youth and it's beginning to show..
A growing movement of drug users and suicide notes..
But it's hard to grasp reality when everything's wrong..
When your worlds crashing around you, it's hard to stay strong..


^^^^^^ dope rhyme scheme flow and good topic

stay up 7/10