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Old 06-22-08, 11:44 PM   #1
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Flight ( 3 ) vs. Format ( 2 )

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Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

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10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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Old 06-23-08, 09:15 AM   #2
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yea

im droppin on tuesday so if you could do the same then that'd be cool
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Old 06-23-08, 06:06 PM   #3
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i'll go 12 whenever i can, try for tues though.
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Old 06-23-08, 06:24 PM   #4
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Fear
Flight vs Format

Form proved he can drop with the best of them.

it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
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Old 06-25-08, 06:08 PM   #5
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fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
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Old 06-25-08, 06:23 PM   #6
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I'll be the first to feed this..good shit guys.

it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
decent.
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
good concept. worded poorly.
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
okay.
i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over
lol k.
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
sick.

vs


fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
good.
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
dope.
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
okay.
see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life
eh.
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
na wasn't feelin this one.


This battle is close as shit..I want some more people to vote an leave some feed on this. In my opinion I think Form pulled this one out with a tad more consistency. It actually came down to quotables. Forms closer was sick..an so was Flights FOR line..thats was dope. There openers were both good. Flight kinda flipped forms concept lol.. but I think Flight started off really strong,..then kinda fell off toward the end. I want to see some more votes an get other peoples opinions.

v/Format
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Old 06-25-08, 06:45 PM   #7
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it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
^Eh. Could have been worded better.
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
^Not that great.
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
^No.
i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over
^Haha. Pretty decent.
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
^Liked this alot too.

fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
^Alright,
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
^Fucking SICK line.
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
^An alright punch. Wording could have been better.
see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life
^Ehhhh. Alright, I guess,
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
^Lol. I don't know about this one.

It was an alright battle, I guess. I wasn't really feeling Format's verse that much. Alot of the punches were just lame and not hard hitting at all. But you had a couple alright punches but not enough to put you ahead of Flight. Flight, your verse was pretty good. A few off punches. But nothing too horrible. I'm giving this to Flight. He really stepped ahead of Format with that second bar.

V/Flight.
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Old 06-28-08, 01:17 PM   #8
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it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
NICE
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
OKISH
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
DOPE
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
EHHH OK

VS

fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
NICE
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
OKISH
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
OKISH
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
OK

V/ FORMAT...HE HAD THE BETTER VERSE
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Old 06-28-08, 03:11 PM   #9
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Format
it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week
Whack, easy and weak punch.
fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th
Just 'cause his name is Flight doesn't mean you should used played out concepts.
peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind
No good.
i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over
It's a good concept, but not really a hard hitting line.
f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
The concept was good but it was way to forced.

Vs.

Flight
fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads
Not bad.
read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one
Sick wordplay, nice punch.
fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'
Good concept, seemed a little forced.
see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life
Nah
so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
Hahahaha, I laughed, good punch.


This wasn't close at all, it was pretty one sided. Played out concepts and bad wording Vs. Fresh ideas and well worded punches.

Vote: Fresh ideas and well worded punches. I mean Flight
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Old 06-28-08, 10:43 PM   #10
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Throwin a vote in this.

Format

it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week

Meh.

fli's gon die quick here in the present
this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th

Wording is weird but the thought was decent.

peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind
writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind

Nice. Gettin better.

i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower
shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over

Okay. Not bad

f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock
ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top

Nice close. It hit and was personal.



Flight

fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads

Meh start.

read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun
i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one

Once again, meh.

fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats
i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?'

Ha. Clever.

see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines
i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life

Okay.

so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater
cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters

Bad close.

OVERALL:

I gotta give it to Format. Though Flight's verse was a little easier to read, the content read was better on Format. The battle was very close, but the big close from Format put him ovet the top in my eyes. For both battlers flow and form could use mose work, that wouldn't fly against the better ups in the league. Decent, enjoyable battle from both and I look forward to more.

VOTE: Format
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Old 06-30-08, 05:26 AM   #11
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Format wins 3 votes to 2.

Format ( 4 ) and Flight ( 2 )
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