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Old 02-07-06, 02:59 PM   #1
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The Undisputed - Inspiration

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The Undisputed - Inspiration.

1st Verse - Bro
2nd Verse - K
3rd Verse - Jonezy

Hooks - Bro

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Old 02-07-06, 07:01 PM   #2
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you need to drop 2 links ur newer so ill leave this open until tommorow
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Old 02-07-06, 09:00 PM   #4
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damn...loving this beat got DAMN...... lol ummm hmmm i guess its tha accent the made me laugh ...

the first guy was monster the only problem is tha Accent u guys are nice as hell just the Accents.....

everything was on point tho Good job Fellaz

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Old 02-08-06, 04:53 AM   #5
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thx..ill hit you up man
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Old 02-08-06, 07:47 AM   #6
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word em 'up!...........
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Old 02-08-06, 08:22 AM   #7
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i like this beat.

first guy got nice flow good variations, good rhyme schemes changing up.. lyrics pretty good, delivery works well with the beat... k same goes again except the delivery is a little too hyped for the beat... hooks is good... 3rd verse is ok, the pronunciation was a little off, flow was cool, could have been tightened abit, but overall this track is pretty nice man, feelin it.
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Old 02-08-06, 10:31 AM   #8
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hot. love da flow and lyrics. its pretty good. just the accent from the 2nd dude is annoyin. either teach him to lose the accent, or lose that nigga cuz i aint feelin him. but overall its iight
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Old 02-08-06, 10:32 AM   #9
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by the way....who came up wit dat beat??
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Old 02-08-06, 03:56 PM   #10
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not sure man..bro had it...

ive re recorded my verse..thx for feed guys
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Old 02-09-06, 03:40 AM   #11
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uppin again..thx
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Old 02-09-06, 04:24 AM   #12
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u need to reply to more people man, its no wonder u never get any replies, and start returning favours and people will reply more also cos theyll think ull reply back
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Old 02-11-06, 11:15 AM   #13
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