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Old 07-06-06, 01:48 AM   #1
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Old 07-06-06, 06:04 PM   #2
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u know the why im posting this....
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Old 07-06-06, 11:34 PM   #3
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And another move to receive feedback ..thank u in advance..
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Old 07-07-06, 12:43 AM   #4
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Hook at the beginning wasn't bad at all. You really need some quality help girl. You got a good flow and shit. Your delivery and emotion get drowned out by your poor quality. Hook still came out good though...lol. Keep droppin em ma
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Old 07-07-06, 03:00 AM   #5
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dig the chorus, sound like a lil kid... verse, quality soundin lil worse, if u got cool edit check out the tutorials for spittin wit a bad mic... like the second verse's multies.. u should keep the higher pitch the whole chorus.... u got good emotion, i think wit better quility it'd be diller...
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lyrics nothin really special.. quility lacking.. but the chorus is pretty catchy and that wit an ansane beat go'n be a decent drop non the less.
i'd say 7/10...
should switch up the flow a lil more. but word keep up... return the feed, pzz
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Old 07-07-06, 03:11 AM   #6
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Thanks for the feed i did the best i could mixing with not speakers.. Laptop sound ... good looks
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