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07-11-06, 08:04 PM
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The See Thru Kid
IP: 3E39 1F80
Replied To Holla @ Me
and Confessional... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231491 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231235 THE SEE THRU KID Story Track .. Pay Attention CLICK THE SIG ... "GOT FENDI?"
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07-12-06, 02:44 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
ansane...ya
beat is upbeat ur flow works here...but, ur vocals sound a tad compressed the screwed doubles sounded ehh... lyrics seem personal or from experience...not bad there rhymin gets hot at the end good drop 1 |
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07-12-06, 02:58 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
I like ur melody on the intro
the beat of course is hot its Ansane your flow is good.....and ur lyrics are tight the only thing that you'd need is a better mic and you'd be pretty damn dope and more enjoyable too listen too........the hook melody is good.....this aint too bad tho.....i'm feelin the joint ------- can you return the favor - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231504 |
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07-12-06, 03:35 AM
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IP: 3E39 1F80
^^ appreciate the feed... workin on the better mic situation too ...
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"LATELY I'VE BEEN FEELING CRAZY N NOBODY UNDERSTANDS ME BUT THEY GON CLAIM THEY KNOW ME WHEN I GO AND GET MY GRAMMYS" GOT FENDI?
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07-12-06, 05:34 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 3967 3635
hmm...
i like the hook...its something i cud sing with ease and its pretty melodic..u got a nice flow but it wasnt steady cos after the second verse the hooks were off (it wasnt balanced on the beat's tempo)u need to up ur quality n delivery( i cud barely get what u saying)..so i aint gonna talk on the lyrics... overall this was a decent job yeah!
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