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Old 04-08-03, 03:52 PM   #1
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Lightbulb can u rap 2 it

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2nd beat i made but the 1st imma put up

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/dblokmusic.htm

need some honest criticisms and shit

can ne1 put sumthin up 2 it

DJX you seem to be a big producer here, what you think bout it for a fruity loop

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Old 04-08-03, 05:58 PM   #2
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personally, i like it

....but i dont know much bout this so it hard to giv specific advice on how to make it betta..

all i can say is keep it up, soundn great
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Old 04-10-03, 01:38 PM   #3
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Argh...

why is the entire song reverbed?

do something with that...

add to this...its got like 2 instruments....

bassline is distortin with the kick....or the kick is just too much...

The strings that come in are too low....

its ok...not horrible...but theres alot u can do with it..

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Old 04-10-03, 03:31 PM   #4
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i expected worse than that

i'll work on it
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