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Old 05-21-04, 03:46 PM   #1
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(Vote)Dalyricalvillain vs. balla69

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16 bar max
i spit first
no feeding off rhymes
3-0 vote= KO
check in and drop right after me
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Old 05-21-04, 04:09 PM   #2
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im here son spit when u ready 16-20 lines holla
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Old 05-21-04, 04:15 PM   #3
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Checkin in...

Balla69 is posin as A cash money reject//
Even if you're Aretha Franklin you'll never get my respect//
Eject, suckas from this site before you get checked//
By noobies like this guy takin rapbattles out to recess//
THis aint playtime, i'm bussin guns wit calibers//
Top stab holes through bitches like King Aurthur with excaliber//
Niggas duck and run as i'm snatchin cats wit my talons, birds//
Die and fly away as i anhialate the challenger//
I've battled many other cats like you//
Who think they koo, sittin around wit shitty as crews//
I'm tellin you true, Balla i am outta your range//
The only skills you got are holdin signs beggin for change//
Its time to rally b, cuz niggas wanna saddle me//
I preach morality to a balla who wanna battle me//
Office and salary is to small to fuck wit a "Cali B"//
And don't rap about ice cuz you'll get finished a fatality//
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Old 05-21-04, 04:20 PM   #4
balla69
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yo are you smokin sum shit fo tyin to battle me /
i pop mah 9'z like i was the po-po/
makin you look like swiss cheese....full of holes/
ill make you sweat more than r.kelly at a girls scout meeting/
you cant see me im to high my levels exceding/
i aint gonn quit til i see you on the pavement bleeding/
ill cut off yo balls n tape to yo face just to say you got balls for facin me/
you couldnt keep up wit me if you tried yo hardest/
ill just keep killin you then its time to harvest/
blow yo head off like a fuckin terrorist/
dawg fuck 50cent im the whole dolla/
i pull rymes out mah ass that make you holla/
yo rymes are mo played out than flannels/
you got mo bitch in you than the lifetime channel/
i make all yo rymes look inferior/
your ass good on the out side but im rippin up your interior/
yo rymes dont even deserve my time/
ill just leave you on the floor slowly dying/
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Old 05-21-04, 04:27 PM   #5
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Koo verse homey...Aight lets get some votes on this shit....
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Old 05-21-04, 04:30 PM   #6
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yo lets get some votes on dis shyt good battle villian holla
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Old 05-21-04, 04:31 PM   #7
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Good Battle both of yous..... now for da breakdown:

DaLyrical: Nice stucture and good consistant flow. Your shit kept buldin' from beginning to end. Your punches were on point. This is what battlin' is all about. You came wit it from the jump. Good opener.... I especially like the line about jabbing holes like excalibur...nice. Toward the end you slacked off a bit and the intensity in the beginning fell off. Nevertheless, you did enuf to finish balla69.

Balla: Structure was weak, and your flow was inconsistent. Opener was weak. Your nicest verse was "yo rymes are mo played out than flannels/
you got mo bitch in you than the lifetime channel/". The rest of you lines were...um...wack! Keep battlin' and elevate!

Win: DaLyricalVillain
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Old 05-21-04, 05:25 PM   #8
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uppin for votes... come on my niggas dont sleep on this shit
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