Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-29-08 at 12:00 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Intangible has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-26-08 12:01 AM.

man i gotta step to this vet man i aint a starter
best stop or ill give u more shots then a photographer
more knock outs and punches then a legendary boxer
next time try viagra and maybe you'll come harder

i go hard i come through wit a shotgun
my shoulder strapped wit shoe string on the shot gun
make it rain 1 hand when i work my aim
blame it on them blue pills and purple haze
i never change its nate every day
im baggen the kane or playing tag with them k's

even though my rap game make them rv's flop
i rather squeeze shots that can make trees drop
this nigga probably eat breathe and sleep cock
this nigga diseased kirk got detox
in my hood you need permiss to breathe dog

this cat he probably slang dimes
were im from we dont throw up gang signs
you aim nines cock back i bang mines
lift Kirk in the air give him MJ hang time

this nigga a kid probably watch bugs bunny
im a hustla mother fucka i rap rubber bans around drug money
i love money if im broke i got an antidote a big gun a hostage and a ransum note

Every day I throw them twins up
and only god will kno were Kirk body end up

its same every day when i bang the 9
im bout to turn Kirks face to a target sign

Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-26-08 11:23 PM.

True story.



This dude IMed me over AIM. Askin' for help. Where here, I.
But with me givin' you tips it reminds me of straight eye for the queer guy,
Askin' to cancel the battle cause you got one with an herb. I chew to chew em',
Cause if Flight is an herb... then why the fuck are you losing to him?
Flight could kill you any day. Ya gangsta shit is barely true.
So as soon as you introduce your plot's verse. Thats where I'll bury you.
Here is a filler. Here is a filler. Blah blah, do I look scared?
I'm dropping this fucking shitty verse only so this battle look's fair,
You're a fucking bad person. I really don't even feel like writin',
So if you get a single fucking vote I'll just DQ you for recycling.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=246757




Didn't try.

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Voted For: Kirk

lmao at recyclin his entire verse..on the same site..in a small time frame..what was he thinking..

anyway..kirks verse was alot better, had actual punches..

Flight could kill you any day. Ya gangsta shit is barely true.
So as soon as you introduce your plot's verse. Thats where I'll bury you.

vs

nothin


v/kirk

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Fear

Voted For: Kirk

INTER: YOUR VERSE SEEM PRETTY SIMILURE TO SOME OLD SHIT I DONE HERD.. just the flow less on point and u made it seem like a starter rather then a vet... sorry i feel that hood spit with real raw raps but not when its to fucking close to being bitting..

kirk: you won bearly i exspected to see a harder verse but it was a let down but not enough to lose to battle just enough to make me lose intrest half way throu it...

Voted For: Kirk

Here is a filler. Here is a filler. Blah blah, do I look scared?
I'm dropping this fucking shitty verse only so this battle look's fair,

lol, hahah, wow @ dropping the same shitty verse in both battles

v/kirk, word.

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The Establishment
I am the Batman.

Word at me having so many of my words in the wrong place. I truly didn't try.

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^^^ your verse be boring anyways .

You're horrible at all aspects of writing. Just so you know.

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Voted For: Kirk

ahahaahhahaah

what a fucking chump



You're a fucking bad person. I really don't even feel like writin',
So if you get a single fucking vote I'll just DQ you for recycling.


that line had me cracking up tho


OWANGE

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One last vote would be appreciated and stuff...........

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