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09-30-09, 01:01 AM | #1 | |
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I enjoyed the read!
Could of been a bit longer and dug into the depths of the peice. But it was still a good read. Your vocab is decent, nothing mind blowing, but for a brainless audience I guess it pays to dumb it down. lol. rhymes are simple. Structure is on point and the peice flows nice. Best Line Isolated freedom distorts my vision & breathing under lock & key so long my hairline's reseeding Best Rhyme Breathing ... Reseeding Worst line technological advices ensure I detail a plan B & C bashing my fist against the wall like I'm using T n T Worst rhyme B & C ... T & T Stay dropping |
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