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6 - 15
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no dick
no hate
no feed
no crew.


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 03:03 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:06 AM.

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:07 AM.

Yo this pussy LFLOWS cant spit, its like he's experiencing vaginal dryness
And this is supposed to be one of Tha Councils finest
Im tha king of text so start refuring to me as your highness
Ya rhymes aren't near as foul as mine-is, probolly dont even know what grime is
Cats is ready to sleep on ya verses, voters come to ya battles wit blankets like Linus/(cat from Charlie Brown/)
You a virgin so how you plan to fuck wit my verse this round
I'll have heads thinkin this is a football game cause youll be tha first down
You wouldnt be able to spice up ya lyrics if you made em wear ya night gown
Cats will think you steppin off tha thrown when I give you loose crowns/(teeth)
Step up and get surved like coustomers at 24 hour diners
This Richard Simmons is after me for bein such a phat rhymer
I dont care how live ya bars are I'll make em all flat liners
Ya skills is dusty like 40 year old coal miners
And ya crew Tha Fam is filled with weaker players like tha
FUCKING 49ers


THIS IS FOR FUN DOESNT COUNT FOR THIS BATTLE<
JUST A FEW EXTRA BARS I FIGURED I WOULD POST FOR THE FUCK OF IT

I'll punch you in da back of ya neck and leave ya spine sore
Yo answer this, whut exactly do you rhyme for?/
Try to share ya thought wit me and you'll get ya mind tore/
If you need employment after I ruin ya career I'll let you sell tickets for my tour/

Dude I Dont Even Have A Rapper


Never Created One

Who Was This Verse Really For

I Smell A Copy And Paste Act Son




Also I Didnt Cheat He Fucked Up His Own Battle

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Thanks Man

Yours Was Cool As Well

I Didnt Create A Rapper Though Homei

So Why You Say That Shit

Doesnt Make Any Sense

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I Wanst Beefin Either Dude

Im Just Pissed Off Right Now

So I Didnt Meaan Anything By The Copy Ands Paste Shit

My Girlfriend Is Being A Bitch

Sure You Been There B4

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

Both of you came good iight battle nice verses
Lyrical: your shit was nice good verse overall nice lnies some funny one too you had funny but good personals made mer ROFL ok punches though though you could do some rewording init yuou hade nice good strucutre and ok flow

Ice Pick: ya shit was iight to you had some messed up strucutre and ok flow ya punches were iight and same with ya personals

VOte: Lyrical for a better verse

Close battle

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Uppin.............................................


I DONT HAVE A RAPPER SO THAT LINE SUCKS

GOOD BATTLE

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

ill vote for u cause i liked your flow better than his

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2 pac is A FUCKIN FAG

I MERKED HIM b 4 i think

I will check into IT

BUT YOU FUKING SUCK AT RAP TUPAC

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

This was a pretty easy one to call, no hate or nothing but it was lyricalflowz hands down. A really easy win for him, his punches were on a level that was clearly above ice pick. I mean just about all his punches were personals, and as far as the rapper line. He was saying that there was nothing in your inventory. The flowz from both of you was a lil off, but Ice Pick you had a lot of streched lines that just threw your flow off, so it was tough to go along with your verse. I will give you that you did have a lot of good metas (24 hour diners, phat diners, and the charlie brown was nice) However they just werent enough to beat his punches, his were really commical.