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check dont get cocky youll get your feelings hurt

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A.I

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In the picture i see the end
Or maybe the beggining of civilazation
I see the creative and i see GODs impatience
For making a world so far from perfection
And so corrupt in so many diffrent deminsions
I see the neglectance of those who care not of life
only of death
shining stars in a darkness of night
From the highest heights i can hear the hark of the angels
I can see as we stare at one another as strangers
I can feel the anger and hatred
The racism and evil thats flagrant
I can almost see the placment of those in the fire
A world of thives,rapist,murders and liers
Or maybe im wrong
and this is not the end but the beggining
A world made before sinning
Where living as one was part of our exisitence
When man was gifted to be one with his creator
for the evils of the serpent came much later
Maybe the lava is the blood of creation
Not the destroyer of that built by satan
but something much deeper my mind is not properly placing
The truth remains something unknowing
maybe its no more then a volcano thats overflowing

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

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both poems was really hot....both had a diff approach which made it harder to choose


big chase...ya poem was really nice...i like the "right" n "left" concept. Great story telling.. i see u put much thought into ya poem...niceely done

CAliph.....ya poem simply talked about the picture....but it went deeper then just "talkin about the picture" which is why i liked ya poem so much.....u went on a whole diffrent level....and made me look at that picture in a whole diffrent way....More then just a poem on the picture...but u went deep and brought a bunch of diffrent topics which is why i think u earn my vote...for turning such a simple poem into sumthing more.....

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caliph:

I Was Really Surprised By Your Verse...You Have Tons Of Potential To Become A Dope Topical Writer...I Think You Wrote This Verse Very Well...And You Used The Picture As Well As Your Emotions To Make This Verse A Good Piece...The Only Thing That Stops Your Verses From Being Great Topical Pieces Is Your Structure...Lack Of Imagery...And Explanations Of Your Surroundings Or In Other Words Your Details Are Descriptive But They Could Be Much Better

Overall : 7/10

Big Chase:

I Liked What You Did With Your Concept...You Created A Story In Which You Were Fighting Yourself...Which Direction To Go...So The Emotion And Depth Was Put To Use Very Well...You Grasped A Hold On This Picture And Wrote How You Felt If You Were In This Setting...Your Structure Was Good And The Imagery Was The Most Surprising Aspect In Your Verse...You Possessed A Lot Of Imagery That Depicted Emotions And Thoughts...Very Well Written Piece

Overall : 8/10

Vote/ Big Chase


I Really Think Caliph Would Have Won If He Used More Imagery And Made Sure His Lines Matched Up More Evenly Both Verses Were Well Written But The Things That Caliph Lacked Where The Things That Big Chase Excelled In Thats Why He Gets My Vote

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thnx uppuin.....

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uppin god peoples.......

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

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thnx its an honor...too bad A.I. booted me lol...........try to work it out but thnx..lol

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naw fuck that i got forsaken blacklisted he cant vote on this thats chase fucking homie dr vote and blacklisted flow take that vote off

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?