Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 04:15 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Eclipsik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 03:46 PM.

JaC M. WrIgHt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 03:53 PM.

kid thinkin he ill well i got the remedy,i rhyme syphalis to put you in your grave cuz my spits are "DEAD-ILL-E"/
when you post a wack verse you only have "yourself to blame for losing" so i guess "your ya own worst enemy"/
play with these words cleverly,voters will see our verses and the win must be surrendered/
cuz eclipsik battles are like "SWEEPSTAKES"..."TO WIN,ALL WE GOTTA DO IS ENTER!"/
yeah this fag aint no mc he fears us ,cuz by accepting this battle u've just "fucked urself " like "SEX-WIT-MIRRORS!"/
son ya cant contest,"aim lyrics at your lungs" ...nothin ''romantic'' when i "take your breath"/
by many its said im best,my punches "hittin 'E harder" than "Red N Meth"!!/
break ya spinal column,'un-even' the 'lines' like a 'seismograph','laptop vertabraes' watch 'backs fold'/
Your style-is-dead, rehearsed-n-old, E couldn't win this battle if he "drove my Royce backwards" to "REVERSE-THE-ROLLS"!!/
leave ya carcus"Washed up" like "lacy petersons body" somewhere in a river, fool/
grippin tools,i spit scriptures the only time u "DROPPIN SCIENCE" cuz u found "CHEMSITRY WAS TOO DIFFICULT"/
clap this bastard,put em in the back of the truck now their nothin but "JUNK-IN-DA-TRUNK" like " the ass of J-LO!" /
turn ya fitted to a halo,in a way we're similar cuz ur style is "O.K." and mine is to "K.O."!!/
if you ever recited virts lyrics my words would make you have seizures n choke/
get the pope,i have a "sense of humor" ...im battlin these " clowns" to prove "i can take jokes!"/
got u "scared of me sun"(son) like "albinos in the summer"/
i'll wreck u again after this and give u so manylosses ur record looks like a SERIAL NUMBER!/
lyrically detatch these maggots,so keep my 'name out your mouth' till I tatoo jac on my DICK,FAGGOTS!/
(Soften tha blow)
ur flow is wack ur time is wasted/
i'm nice as hell…… so you might as well give inn like tavern-donations!/
Spit rapid-notation, ample in murking-gays when the verse-displayed/
Cuz the way I run through ya lines you’d think I was helping rehearse-a-play/!
I’ve murdered all and the herbish-fakes back for more; u’ll throw-ya-life-away/
And he doesn’t ghost for crews he got none but E known-to-write-for-daes/
You’s a trifle-gay……mayne, powder pimp? that should be yah crew/
and when girls say you well hung they just talking bout how I killed-you/
Sit still-duke! Watch n learn as im toppin herbs, you fags-with-the-worst-lines
and I’ll only re-call ya name… if you didn’t answer-the-first-time!/

(BREAK DOWN)
Ya losing again the usual win for me I'll rattle~ya~block with lethal flows so/
Most know the only time you have battles~on~Lock is when people no show/
If The Streets are the road to success, his have a 'dead end' sign/
Cuz we've seen 'no proof' of U's 'strength'- like non alchoholic wine/
Me?-Stellar.. Jac?-Never.. his avatar has got me thinking-this-fruit's-queer/
and you'll lose here cuz the last time you had A W was drinking-the-Root-Beer/
yo How you got a life ? U always online, U STAY IN THE HOUSE./
Only clique you roll with is when u play with your mouse./
an this kids probably gonna say hes ill an got jewels an we knew/
tha closest hes been to shyne(shine) is watchin tha mtv interview/
Play and be played, you're finished kid, you're elevating wont ever help/
you'll be forever delt.. cuz ya verses like ya sex life, you were never felt/

How you think you gon' be ill ~attackin'~mics~
Other lyrics is the only thing you ~"jackin'~right~
Get a "CLUE" like fuckin' "Blues" ya ~toddler~
Got his name ~fondling~ with dudes ~cocks~n~butts~
Start callin' me Akon cause this battle ~"locked~up"~
While you was away ya girl was gettin' ~knocked~up~
You ~not~much~ compe~tition~, probably should've ~listened~
Tryin' to rob when I got bullet proof re~sistance~
I'm fillin' you with ~tension~? Look how I leave my ~imprints~
Slappin' ~cense~ into this ~criminal~ now call it ~"im-sense~

Voted For: JaC M. WrIgHt

DAMN.....

eclipse:..um...good effort...toddler and cocks n butts dont rhyme but the blues clues was clever...i didnt really see a HARD punch...nothin made me go "oooh"

JAC:...wow, i finally seen sumone nice on this site...i didnt like that dead-ill-e line tho...you spit WAY more lines then him which is kinda cheatin but i know u cant see his verse when you post so its whatever...sweepstakes line was nice...multis are ill


fuck....that reversed the rolls line looked WAY Too FAMILIAR.....this is probably why

Your style-is-dead, rehearsed-n-old, E couldn't win this battle if he "drove my Royce backwards" to "REVERSE-THE-ROLLS

http://www.lyricalmenace.com/forum/showthread.php?t=817

^^ look at headakes verse


damn....i thought u was nice too

guess eclipse wins cuz dude was bitin

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shit they won't let you switch up votes...That's some crab shit I read that link man WTF had no shame bitin' thinkin he wasn't gonna get caught.

Ha And The Fact That He Bit Adds To My Personal About Him Jackin' Other People Lines Lol!

ups lets get this overwith.

hes gonna get banned for biting...your gonna win this battle...even if he gets 5 votes decision will be reversed....but yea....he but a LOT of that verse...all i did was type the familiar line into google and gave me like half his verse

*laughs*

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Damn I don't like winnin like that though. Can't they just waive the battle off?

eclipsik easily has this.. i hate reading streatched line, which the othe rkid had.

vote please.
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